Hey guys, I'm new to this PUA thing.
Right now, I'm working on my DHV stories. So I had this one and would like to make it into a DHV spike story. Is it good? Can I make it better?

The real story is I went to a barbecue on a friend's house and a not-so-pretty girl (I don't wanna bash her that much haha) were hitting on me pretty hard. But, back on my needy days, I had this oneitis for another girl and she was there and I thought if I kissed that girl my oneitis would lose all interest she may have had in me (holy geez! How wrong I was...). And that coupled with that other girl not being attractive I did not pull the trigger on her.

So I was thinking, maybe this totally AFC story could become a good DHV. I am thinking of adding this story after talking about girl coding and then show them how this does not work with guys for a little fun.

The DHVed story:

So I invited some friends of mine to my house for a barbecue the other day [leading men]. There is this girl, she is good looking and all, but she is kinda boring, she doesn't have that good positive energy around her [showing I don't go for the looks, pre-selection].
So there she was, sitting by my side, talking into my ears and I was like trying to get a little more space [willingness to walk away]... when my good buddy walks by us.
I didn't want to just dump her in front of everyone, I'm not that bad. So I screamed to my buddy: "Hey Paul! I gotta talk to you about that project we need to finish asap!" and he was like "Huh? What project?"
And I was like "you know, THAT project" bla bla bla and then he turned and gave me that look of "WTF you talking about man?! Are you crazy? We don't have any projects on...".
And bang! I just realized that this [coding] does not work with us men. This is totally a women's thing.

If you may, give me your opinion if this is good, crappy, boring, stupid, great, genius whatever!

Thanks.

Be weary that if you make your DHV too obvious, it's obviously a DLV. Guys that have plenty of attractive women in their life don't have to make the statement, it's in their behaviour.

Thanks James, I think it's all down to the delivery. I gotta get the right calibration on it and it might work.

Man, this has got potential. You have understood the points of DHVing. If I man suggest a change... I would focus more on why she was being boring. Just being boring is not enough to create a feeling of reality, being there.

"I sat down to talk to this girl who at first seemed really cool. Kinda cute, not like a model but she had something, you know when you just feel it. And then she opens her mouth. She starts talking about all these strange things like her last dentist appointment and her grandmothers cat, all the wierdest things you ever heard. Ok, sometimes that can be fun but this was like how much money her grandma spends on catfood in a week, conversational killer... SO my friend walks by and I try to signal him to get me out of there, it was a desperate "Mayday Im going down"! And he just didnt get it! I tried everything and you know you wanna be able to be rescued by your bud but even though I tried to tell him that we need to talk about something really boring, he just didnt understand... And the girl, she didnt even notice, she was too busy talking. I just hate that... And I missed the chance to get the last hotdog, some guy named Steve got that, soo annoying..."


So a bit more detail makes it more believable...

Good work!

Ezo

Yeah, defenitely worth to try!
The things i have noticed when telling a DHV story is that:
A) Keep it quite simpple ( if they are drunk they may not follow you because its too complicate. So create a story which is easy to follow )
B) Add DHV spikes here and there ( this is the reason why you tell the story and rises your value )
C) Build up the tenssion toward the end ( When you build up the tenssion toward the end they keep their interest right from the beginning right to the end. It also makes your story better because it releases all their questions like a bomb )
D) Keep it quite short ( This was a major mistake when i started to use these DHV storys that they were too long. They had hard time to focus because so much happened around us when we were in the nightclub )

And dont forget the kino ( you can demostrate what the guy in the story did to her and just throwing high5s when you are finished )

[ Johnny B ]

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Good points Johnny!

Remember that the story has got to sell itself within the first seconds and it has to speak girl language, that is, emotional descriptions. And it has to lead up to a grande finale. It has to have a point that is either funny or relieving.