Hi guys having a hard time getting my about me section on plenty of fish up to high enough standards for a great profile.

This is what I have:

I consider myself to be a decent guy, sensitive when the time is right and honest and blunt when the situation calls for it. The ones who understand me best believe I am a man of integrity as well as being very laid back. When it comes to life outside college I keep up with the world going out meeting new people and always finding a brand new experience to take with me.

I enjoy hanging with my friends and having a great time but of course relax and do myself some good. The gym has become a big part of my life at the moment. I find it keeps me relaxed and balances me out keeping me energized. Of course it also helps myself stay healthy and in shape.

Recently moved looking to explore what the city has to offer. Message me if your up for that challenge as in keeping me interested



Any ideas on how to improve the content I have so far to turn it into a better profile would be helpful. Thanks

It seems alright..i'd take out the the decent and replace it with something uplifting. its good you're breaking it up with spaces to give the person a break when reading and always keep it short and to the point. what i think is when you write out a profile u want to make it enticing and true to yourself.
here's mine i'm 22:

"I like making ladies smile whenever I can because I'm an endorphin dealer, wanted in fourteen states!

I'm just looking to have some fun around this city. I think all people are incredibly interesting. No matter who or what you are, I endeavor to find something about you to respect. I have a keen interest at learning how things work. What else..when u make me laugh that's like a bonus! So when u make me laugh it becomes a turn on. I'm adventurous and prone to boredom so I'm always seeking out new experiences. I often act spontaneously, but I also like to have a solid plan."

when search you see at least 2 to 3 sentences before the about me breaks off so i thought of putting something eye catching as the 1st line. which so far has worked out well. another thing if you living in the east coast forget everything i just said. jp but put your own twist to it. good luck bro.

aha ha... I have a plenty of fish account too.. That's funny shit..

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Well this is interesting that this profile may be better than the one I just came up with a few days ago. I could use jurupa's opinion here. I used this exact profile in my test city , created this sort of copy and paste message sent it to 50 girls and got 10 out of 30 replies from the ones who have read it so far. some even commented on certain aspects of my profile.

Now the actual city I live in I cahnged things around in my profile except for the pictures and not having the same results although I have been tailoring my messages to their profile. Maybe I should stick with this copy and paste message I came up with. By the way the test city I am getting replies back from girls in the 9- 10 range and my city 7-8.5.

west coast of canada

In my opinion, the pictures are far more important than the content of your profile. If they are hot, or at least appear to be, They are getting at least 10 messages a day, they read through them, then they gotta check the profiles. And if they are hot they are likely both busy and social. They don't have time for a thorough run down of every profile. I bet they first scan pictures, click off if you are DQ'd, if they like the pics then they read....so I guess I'm saying focus on many high quality pics where you are socially proofed.