ok here's my POF profile http://www.plentyoffish.com/member13823667.htm im new to online sarging and so far im not getting any success. Im not sure how to make it stand out and exactly how to really start off conversations, so any help and advice i can get i'd really appreciate it

Recommendations:


-Have photograph 3 (unless every women hates the Lakers-then were all screwed)

-Ask & Find Out? If your embarrassed don't put anything or put something funny (you service hot midget women is better).

-Smarts:Just put College it just spells Kanye West dropout. (THIS IS NOT A PASSPORT APPLICATION) you will not have Interpol shutting you down because you lied.

-"Well 1st off i'm 21, down 2 earth and layed back, other times ill be outgoing spontaneous and just fun 2 be around . People say i'm pretty social and fun."
You kinda repeat yourself three times here, I don't know nothing about what you like and dislike I mean you might like marbles, stamps,stoning obsese people?.

-She's not your average stereotype, but she's that 1 in a million ya know? Which one is it? this just sounds like you are desperate and have no type.

-Cant really describe what we would do. I can just say as long as we both end up with smiles in our faces and knowing we enjoyed ourselves together that would be enough to say we had a great 1st date:do you write poetry? No seriously mate, a girl wants to know what she would do, she wants something exciting if she is going to risk her life to meet someone off the internet, it just sounds like you will make the date up as you go along, it does not mean you can add surprises in the mix.


You seem a nice guy, who is obviously looking for something serious which is communicated well, I would get someone to proof read/decypher this as most of it is in hieroglyphics.

J Smooth is pretty good and knows what he is talking about for online gaming, so he would be one of the best from what I have seen on the forum.

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thanks for the advice man, i set it up like that to add some sort of mystery hmm apparently i did a lame job lol. Ok wat about picture 3 didnt really understand that comment and im more of a cocky funny guy in person just dont know how to really express it online hehe, major problem i know

The third photo of you on your profile.


You see made a bad job of communicating who you are, you communicated the opposite of the cocky funny guy.

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I changed up my profile a little could you let me know what you guys think?

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member13823667.htm

You should post some pictures with other guys and with girls. Your profile says and implies that you're a fun guy, but in all three pictures you're sitting down and by yourself.

thanks for the advice i completely forgot about adding more pictures focused more on the actual profile added a few pics so i think it looks better now

that lakers hat in the last pic is nuts! i would pay $50 for it if they had a DETROIT one tho. is it a 59-50? i love fitteds, i have about 25 all detroit all different colors and 59-50's.

See the improvements are already landing you hits!

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"That's how you become great, man. Hang your balls out there!"--Copy store clerk (Jerry Maguire)

haha... but im a guy n i look things completely different. the only thing i noticed in that whole profile was that hat basically. a girl is gonna nitpick that whole thing!

"Well names Ricardo, Richie for short. I go by many names and yes D1ck and @sshole are just a couple of em haha. Pretty much if your a b1tch then i will be those names. Act like you got respect for yourself and ill do the same. I'm not looking for a barbie wannabe, platinum blonde with a huge ass and tits haha I mean ya that's nice to look at but it's pretty much the definition of an airhead and if your one of them then float away from my page lol . I'm looking for a girl that doesn't mind spending a Friday night at home chilling watching a movie. If you have at least half a personality then ya of course i'm willing to get to know you. If all else fails, then we can always just be friends.
I listen to all types of music, i do read an occasional book here and there, my hobbies vary from laying down, listening to music to going out hitting up 6 flags or just getting a rush in life. I can be the biggest goofball you'll meet then again also the sweetest guy (only if you deserve it though) "


Hey I just wanted to throw my two cents in the mix. Change everything. Delete it and do it all over.. Well atleast to the music taste.. Do I even need to go into why you should redo that whole first paragraph? If you are degrading them that much why would they want to send messages? Your Nic name may be dick or asshole or whatever but not something you should say on a dating site where most woman are looking for mature guys! But hey its your profile.. Good luck to ya..

haha well it is a work in progress im not used to online dating sites so ya thanks for the help