real quick i havent much luck on POF take a look at my profile tell me the good and bad if any good. no one has added me to their favorites either. heres my link
http://www.plentyoffish.com/member3607451.htm

I knew the stuff I learned in public speaking would be useful...
Don't begin anything with "I'm not good at this, but..." unless you're trying to emphasize that yours is not a valuable opinion. This should not be one of those times.
Cut "Lets begin." Start strong, end strong. This is not a strong beginning phrase - it has no meaning or content. It's just wimpy filler space.

Everything after that seems pretty legit. You show that you've got standards. I guess the only other thing, and I'd look for a second or fifth opinion on this, is that it only shows a little personality. I'd try to expand on that - show them how rad you are.

So what if no girl has added you to their favorites. This is not MySpace. Most guys have 0 favorites on POF. As far as your profile goes. Besides what CrackingWise said, its overall weak and AFC. You come off as the stereotypical nice guy. Theres nothing there that says your not going to put up with the crap girls throw at their guys to test them.

consider a catchy or unorthodox subject line. checking out ur profile, try breaking ur writeup into a few paragraphs. it seemed like alot to read and rather wordy. a friend once told me to use the k.i.s.s. method.
I like how you peppered in fun and interesting stuff. just keep it positive and exciting

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