I met this girl who worked at Macy's. Ran a solid opener, did the cube, worked very well, predicted that she was a writer. Invited her to join me at the batting cages sometime later that week. Number closed. Texted her over the period of 5 days, went like this.

Marlow: Weirdest thing just happened. I was pulling into the gas station just a minute ago, and these two bums fighting outside it lol. What you doin doofus?

Her: Hahah Doin laundry then going to work out.

Marlow: Yea, I'm heading up to the baseball field soon to practice. Just wanted to
say that when I met you I thought you were really cool, and you had a
vibe I hadnt felt in awhile. I'd like to hang out sometime this week so I
can get to know you a bit better.

Her: Yeah! For sure!

Marlow: Cool. Well I'm buzy until like thursday afternoon, you want to make
tentative plans to go hang out thurs? Or is there a better time for u?

Her: Well I cant be out super late cuz I have work at 7 the next morning. What
wud you want to do?

Marlow: Batting Cages. Havent done that in awhile.

Her: Yeah. I'd rather go do something than like just watch a movie.

Marlow: Yeah. You cant even talk during a movie, kind of defeats the purpose of
hanging out.



Next day, day before we planned to go out

Marlow: Question. Does a grey shirt and tan shorts go together? You work at
Macy's.

Her: Eh, not the best.

Marlow: Yeah. Thought that looked a little funny. Wish someone would have told
me that in middle school. What you up to?

Her: At Cayman Point (A suburb of Georgetown)

Marlow: Fun. I need to help my cousin move some stuff until like 4 tomarrow,I
can probably pick u up after then and we'll go to the batting cages, it'll be
pretty casual. That sound ok?

(No followup after that. Flaked out)

Was I too pushy? Did I do something wrong when I brought up the logistics (whos
picking who up, when)? It's been a day now, no conversation. Is
it dead on the vine? Critisizm/Comments needed.

Thanks fellas.

Marlow

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Marlow,

The main problem that I see here is lots of attraction related stuff and some fun bantering even but no real comfort. She doesn't know anything about you really. She likes you and I'm sure she was attracted to you but she didn't know you.

She is attracted to a lot of guys but it doesn't mean she'd be alone with all of them. To decide that is when a good amount of comfort and rapport come into play. You should have used your text game to gain comfort with her so it would have been easier to go one a date with you.

When you suggested to pick her up that probably made it hard to say yes to. Whatever you do don't bring up the missed date. If she brings it up, treat it with the mindset its no big deal you had fun anyways. You can always text her something like... "Are you okay? Haven't heard from you in a bit. You didn't get fired from Macy's for telling someone grey and tan go together did you?"

The goal with the message isn't to be an ass or cocky, it's just ot make her smile that's it. Then bridge into talking about comfort building topics.

Jon

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