Hey guys,

New to the online thing, and PUA in general. When I was younger I always had girls pursuing me and didn't much need to worry about it. These days competition is a little stronger and I'm trying to step my game up.

What are your thoughts on this description. I kept it short and funny to set a light, fun tone for communications. I also changed it to this from a longer, more standard and cliche profile.

'I am known amongst my friends to be awesome in general, mostly because I sometimes tell them moderately funny stories that I have stolen from others and pass off as my own. Feel free to send me a hilarious message, which I may or may not repeat to my friends. I might even have a conversation with you afterwards to let you know how it went over.'

Thoughts?

Any thoughts on how I can improve this?

To be honest there is no personality to it. Plus it doesn't say anything about you and its to short to say anything about you.

I have to agree on that..

Why is your profile so sucky right now? Well remember this: in the end, it's up to a WOMAN to decide if she feels comfortable and safe enough around you, and if she feels you're trustworthy..so in short, you need a certain level of COMFORT before she'll "allow" you to move to the next step of the interaction with her..

And that's a little known secret about meeting women online..because you can create GIGANTIC amounts of comfort before she has even seen you. How? The more you tell, the more you "sell". Because every piece of information reveals MORE about you, she feels safer, more comfortable and more trust..because she knows you better. This means that by simply providing her with enough info, you can cut a LOT of corners when it comes to comfort. The only thing you have to do is NOT f*ck up your info..don't come with boring, long *ss descriptions..no tell everything in a FUN way.

So you're the rebel type huh? Tell me your rebellious story, so you live in what's-it-called in I-dont-know-where? What's so great or lame about it..make the info come to life like you did with this little piece right now..you can do it..just tell more about you man.

And hey if you have more questions? Come back to my internet invasion topic man..I'll be answering lots of questions there that you can learn from..