I have been on plenty of fish for about 2 months. I get tons of replies and even a few convo's going. I have gotten 3 numbers but they all went to shit. I was just opening with HI how are you crap. I'm going to be moving on to better stuff but dont' want to fuck it up in the convo part. Here is my about me please give advice.

about me:

I'm a pretty humble person I don't really like to brag about myself. Without going into to much detail I live a pretty adventures life and like to always be on my toes. I love trying new things and love change since I get bored easily. I also really love music and comedy. I don't take myself or things to seriously. I feel blessed with the cards life has dealt me and wouldn't trade my friends and family for anything.

first date:

I don't like to give up the element of surprise :-p




ok, so what should I change? Also to add I have a pic of me riding dirtbikes, bunjee jumping, and DJing. Is that too much? Also, should I talk about me riding or wait till person? I have used the dirtbike thing and F-closed 2 girls with it and gotten about 8 numbers so I know girls eat it up I just don't know if I should say anything in my profile or not.

Well thanks for the help

I am confused here. You say you got 3 numbers from POF, but then go on to say you got 8.

Anyway my guess is your pictures cover up the lack of aggression or manliness in your about me. As your about me comes off as weak and AFC like. But it seems you are not doing that badly with that setup if you are getting numbers and getting a ton of conversations from girls. If anything it seems your problem is the conversations them selves.

no bro. 3 numbers from POF. 8 numbers from bars when I say the extreme sports I'm into. I'm asking if I should have pics of me doing extreme sports or if it comes off as trying to hard.

no shit my about me sucks that's why I posted it. Do you have any ideas how to make it not suck?

Ah okay. On the extreme sport thing, if it something you do more than dab into then have pictures of yourself taking part in doing such things.
Make the overall tone of the about me more manly/aggressive. It would help to get rid of or at least move the first sentence further along in the profile, as the first sentence really sets the tone of the about me section. Open with something that is funny or off the wall or what ever. But make sure its manly/aggressive. Also mention that you do take part in extreme sports. Like how long you been doing it and if you won anything.

thanks man. i'll keep ya posted how it goes

Why did the three numbers go to shit? Maybe that's something you should consider. You'll get more numbers, but are you having issues on the phone or are the chicks flaking?

Here's my POF Level 10 technique. Make a profile that fucking kicks ass. If you are not getting unsolicited mail saying yours is the best. It is not right.

The Level 10 profile is huge. For one, you do get a lot of unsolicited mail. But the most important thing is that the profile is your main muscle. It does it all. Once it's jacked up you can hit the ladies up with hip, cool, confident and short messages and the profile does the rest.....

Pictures are huge. Stage them. Show yourself doing interesting stuff. Fuck, I got a comic on mine. It's marketing. The winner takes all. Lame profiles just flounder. Might as well not play.