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Well to start off I'm pretty quiet. I'm not shy or scared of talking to people, like I'll talk to someone if I have something to say, but I still don't talk a lot. I'd say I'm pretty intelligent. I'm very laid-back, easy-going. I do help my family and friends out a lot and I'm very loyal. As for my sense of humour I'm pretty silly and childish; I like silly roleplaying and sometimes I just twist peoples words round and turn it into something silly and funny, most people love it and some people just don't get it. I'd say I'm adventurous as I like trying out new things and I'll have a go at anything.
As for what I do, well boxing, kickboxing and lifting weights I do that a lot, while I'm not studying. I train pretty much everyday and I have done since I was like 10. I go out at weekends with friends round nightclubs. I like watching movies,and I love horror films. I likereading about psychology, and magic, sort of like Derren Brown stuff cos I find all that interesting. I like reading biographies rather than fiction because they're real. I've read stuff about a lot of different boxers, bareknuckle fighters, gangsters, all that sort of stuff.
I have had relationships with women, but the longest one I've had was about a month, because I got bored and I didn't find any of them interesting. I'd say I spend more time hanging round with guys than girls because of training boxing and that, but I actually have more girl friends. I don't have a lot of spare time to hang around because of college and so the spare time I do have I spend mostly training with the guys, or I'll be out round town probably one night a week with my friends (mostly girls)
So there we go that's pretty much all I can think of
Thanks Adam,
For the "About Me" area based on what you have said here is what I would write if it was me. Again, feel free to reword it and make it your own words, but definitely keep with the content.
Your Original About Me
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''Hi I'm Adam, I'm 18 and I'm from Danesmoor. I'm studying sport at Chesterfield College. I do a lot of boxing, kickboxing in my spare time, I love it! I love meeting new people, so add me and say hi
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Revised About Me
What you don't recognize me? I'm Adam. My best friends would describe me as a man of few words while at the same time being confident, humorous, intelligent, adventurous, loyal, and laid back. Think that is a lot to take in? I care a great deal about my friends and family and would do anything for them if the need arrised. They are very important aspect of my life.
Most days you'll find me working out and cutting up at the gym while boxing, or kickboxing with the guys. From there I like going out to nightclubs with my guy and girl friends, watching a good horror movie at home, or reading a good book. I love going out trying new things any chance I get.
On a deeper level psychology and magic are topics that entertain my mind, and I enjoy reading about. As you can tell I stay busy and that's the way I like to be. I'm always up for meeting new people so feel free to send me a message.
I hope you enjoyed this. Here is the "WHY" behind why I wrote it this way.
You said that you are pretty quiet but I wanted to put a positive spin on that, and wanted to describe your personality right away as best I could. Hence....
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What you don't recognize me? I'm Adam. My best friends would describe me as a man of few words while at the same time being confident, humorous, intelligent, adventurous, loyal, and laid back.
The I want to start getting the DHV spikes or Attraction Spikes in as quickly as posisble but make them suttle. I continue with this confident playful tone in the message.
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Think that is a lot to take in? I care a great deal about my friends and family and would do anything for them if the need arrised. They are very important aspect of my life.
I go immediately for Protector of Loved ones demonstration of higher value. Online this is very important to show you are a good guy and a provider in a sense. Showing you are normal is huge online.
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Most days you'll find me working out and cutting up at the gym while boxing, or kickboxing with the guys. From there I like going out to nightclubs with my guy and girl friends, watching a good horror movie at home, or reading a good book. I love going out trying new things any chance I get.
I wanted to get your hobbies in without trying to come out as bragging. I inserted that you hang out with men and women. This triggers the pre-selection attraction switch, but also shows you don't just hang with women, cause that can imply you are AFC.
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On a deeper level psychology and magic are topics that entertain my mind, and I enjoy reading about. As you can tell I stay busy and that's the way I like to be. I'm always up for meeting new people so feel free to send me a message.
I wanted to insert this in here because a lot of women do find psychology fascinating when I talk to them online or in field. This also adds some depth to you as a person. Showing that you stay busy is somewhat a DHV as well since you aren't at home playing Video Games all day long. Finally, I called the reader to action to send you a message.
That is the reasoning behind all that I did. I tried to keep a confident and playful tone through the About Me section. I don't feel that we are misrepresenting you at all. Again, if you want you can use this as is or reword it to your taste.
Hope it helps,
Jon
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