I've been pouring over PUA material from the likes of Style, Mystery, and this forum and finally got the courage to go out and start. My first night was amazing. I #closed a girl at a club and opened many sets. I did a good job walking around and talking to people making sure not to DLV by wandering around. I had numerous people compliment me on my energy, style, and looks. I had the girls buying me drinks (water, mind you), giving me cigarettes, and eventually feeding ME at the end of the night. After everything was wound down around 3am, I was driving home and I received a txt from my target:
I used a Style method with a twist to #close. I tore my business card in half and gave her the half with my cell phone # and gave her the other half with a pen. She wrote her number down.

Onto the problem:

I freaked out a bit when she texted me and wasn't prepared for that. I texted her back this:
I'm not sure if it was a mistake in timebridging, but I haven't gotten a reply. I thought after a txt from her like that I could do nearly anything and still be good. What do you guys think about that txt and what I may have done differently. Mind you, only about 12 hours have passed, but that has been 12 hours of agony unfortunately. I dig this girl and hope that it turns into something.

Comments, suggestions?

Deftx

Well she really didn't have to work for you, did she? Keep that in mind, deftx.

Your reply looked a little too excited to hear from her. You're really working under her rules by asking her if dinner is okay and asking her what day is best for her.