http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P476dmjMVAE


Haha just kidding, it's my girlfriend. I'd knock you in a second if you tried.

But let me know what you think of the video, we slaved for a good 6-7 hours to make just 30 seconds worth of footage.

If you have a YouTube feel free to rate/fav/sub because we'll be releasing plenty more videos soon!!!

Thanks a lot guys,

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Hahahaha, nice.

Well that video was pretty sweet, good job

why?

she looks like Lilly Allen

Shit. I'll pick her up fo free! lol jk dog. Funny bit tho

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That was a really, really cool video man.

The likelihood of me picking up your girl is very low because it's a big world and running into her is highly improbable. However, you bet your ass I'd try if I did meet her. (It could be her evil twin for all I know! Plausible Deniability. )

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Hahaha thanks a lot guys! I really appreciate all your good feedback!!
I'm gonna try to make some more videos starring her, and lol I'm glad she's pick-up worthy.

Haha I appreciate your responses and so does she!

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I thought the exact same thing

She looks like a slighty sexier version of Lilly Allen and she's better at tha dancing, I think.

I wonder whether she herself is aware of the similarity.

Scroll about mid way on the link below:

http://www.attractwomen.com.au/weekend_ ... women.html

What am I supposed to be looking for?

The video editing was done well but idk... the sketches seem extremely juvenile and goofy (no offense). I think if you started doing stand up you'd develop a far better comedic intuition and find out what your best material is. For instance, every time you do another show you try new jokes. Half of them suck and you get rid of them, the other half you keep. And then you keep trying different ways to deliver the good jokes, refining the delivery until its perfected. Becoming a great comedian takes years of writing, editing and rewriting

Bullshitting w/ your friends is no good because they'll laugh at your jokes even if they suck. And youtube is no good because you're not getting immediate feedback, the ppl that don't like it don't comment and you don't know which parts get a good response and which parts people hate.

Almost all the writers for the Onion, SNL, MAD Tv and the Daily Show did stand up in order to improve their style and they always watch the reactions of the live TV audience. It's all about continual self-improvement

postscript: sorry if I came off as an arrogant prick here. When I'm on the net I just type what comes to mind

Man, you might just owe me $25k. I was in Torronto last week and ran into this girl who looked JUST like her.

She was the quiet sorta goofy type, kinda reserved when I first met her but she was cool after a bit. We sat near this bus stop and chatted for an hour. She missed 2 buses she could've taken to get to her house.

Gonna call her next time I'm up that way. Logistics didn't work out terribly well at the time.

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LOL, naw... wasn't her because she'd literally kick you in the nuts if you made a move.
I know her well.

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And THYMOLOGY

I appreciate your feedback. I definitely agree.. that's what it's called TLE 1.1 right now, as we reach 2.0 we'll have our best style perfected (hopefully).

So, I for now am trying to get feedback on my stuff...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gyZYrTwygyo

check that out, it's my newest one and let me know what you think.

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