Am I allowed to claim "delivery over content" here? The point is to make it a fun, cornball experience. It's very much supposed to invoke thoughts of middle school "romance" and all of the giggling that goes along with it.

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Some vices miss what is right because they are deficient, others because they are excessive, in feelings or in actions, while virtue finds and chooses the mean.
Aristotle, Ethica Nichomachea

I agree, that is definatley i very cool way to say this. Im sure a girl would LOVE it

Oh yea, definetly. Delivery of anything is much greater than the content, but my point is that there are better ways to invoke that "middle school romance" than that line you threw in. An average person looking at that line on here will most likely deliver it horribly and especially with that certain line, can end in catastrophe.

Right now though, I'll be sticking with my line, although your line is very good in making an impression. For me, that kind of way will make me look like a goof and that's the last thing I need a girl to remember. If I ever find something that can mix both a strong impression and still be "alpha" then I'll post it here.

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You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take

I said this recently and it worked a treat "We've been seeing each other a while now lets make 'us' official"

This way you assume that you've been seeing each other and that she likes you

Totti

The reason I love this one is because you are not asking her if she would like to be in a relationship. It is the difference between a question a statement of what is going to happen.. which makes ALL the difference. You want to be sure of what you want, so you tell her, dont ask her and normally she will be right along with you if your frame is strong.