hey guys, i'm very new to this pick-up business, and i'm still assimilating all of the reams of different information and seeing what might work for me. i'm not really comfortable with just using other people's canned material, so i'm working on my own DHV/comfort-building stories based on my real experiences. just to give you all some background, i'm 25 years old, i live in shanghai working as a piano teacher. i'd say looks-wise i'm probably an 8-9, but i definitely suffer from a lack of confidence at times, particularly in the bar/club environment, where my body language, tone of voice, and going blank/saying dumb shit seem to let me down more often than not. i am recognising all my AFC tendencies however, and i'm 100% committed to improving myself any way i can. i'm aware of my selling points, but i might need some help with the marketing and packaging!

anyway, without further ado, here are my first attempts at DHV stories for A2/C1. any advice would be MUCH appreciated!


"I love to travel, you can just open yourself up to so many new experiences, see things in a completely different light. I went travelling around the world with my girlfriend and it was such an incredible experience. And if you go travelling with your lover, you find yourself doing the craziest things. It’s like, you’re away from home, so you let your inhibitions go. We made love in the strangest of places… On the plane from London to Bali, when everyone on the plane was asleep, my girlfriend took my hand and dragged me into the bathroom and had her wicked way with me there and then! And on our last night in Thailand after we’d been to a bar… you know, when you have that warm and fuzzy feeling after you’ve had just the right amount to drink (or maybe just one too many!), and we were walking hand in hand along the beach, and we just stopped where we were, stared into each other’s eyes, and made love right there and then on the beach. Don’t you love it when things are just spontaneous and exciting? With me, right now, I think it’s the most thrilling thing! So, where’s the craziest place you’ve ever made love?"

"My friends and girlfriends often tell me they love the fact that I’m very tactile. I don’t know why, but I always feel like if there’s too much physical distance between two people it’s hard to build an emotional connection. Like at my boxing club, for example… I swear some of the guys in there wouldn’t even hug their own mother! But I think it feels great to be able to close that distance. I’ve got tons of really close female friends here, and when we’re out shopping together or whatever, we’ll always be holding hands or walking arm in arm. And it can be in a completely non-sexual way too.. I just think it feels so good to be touched, and helps you feel much more connected and comfortable with someone."

I'm also want to write some gambits about the fact that i'm a boxer, and that i'm a pianist, but i'm still not sure of the best way to frame these. I sometimes come off as a bit effeminate at first (plenty of people in the past have thought i was gay, but i guess this isn't always a bad thing), so i'm thinking perhaps i should emphasise the boxing a bit more... what do you guys think?

i'm still having to convince myself that these things will work, but the main thing is that i AM convincing myself day by day, and i know that until i believe it will work then it won't.

thanks for reading this, and any pointers from more experienced guys than me will help me immensely!

edd

Why are you saying this story? this makes you seem like your about to get married to someone! its too long, and your girlfriend dosnt have a name! its all over the place, focus on what emotion you want to stimulate and stimulate it.

"Omg dude you would not believe what happened, we were travelling from china to Taiwan on this plane and it was a really long flight everyone was asleep when out of nowhere my girlfriend is like.... baby.... im like hon haha.. common we are on a plane, and it was one of these small tacky aircrafts with chicken in the back so there wasn’t much room.. anyway i moved her hand away im like dude NO! she kept looking at me and im like omg.. okay i cant believe im doing this... we went into this little clunky toilet and started going at it, and mind you Jen gets really vocal, but its not your regular squeal or moan, her squeal literally brakes glass! i sometimes have to wear earplugs.... ugh.. so anyway people started waking up and im trying to get my pants back on when suddenly the plane takes a massive nose dive and we go flying out stumbling over everyone.. weird part is that i feal on a granny youd think shed be pissed but i got winks.. whats that all about? *shivers*

moral of the story, planes and sex = a BAD thing!

so whats the craziest thing YOU have ever done?"

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