FEEDBACK IS MUCH APPRECIATED! <---focus will be on set 3

Ok so we get into the club. Right when I walk into the door I open the girl scanning the drivers licenses (Door Girl = DG). She hands everyone some vip card promotion thing. I opened her right away for random convo/state booster.

Regalia: Oh crap I put my license away
DG: Oh man why would you do that?
Regalia: To slow down the line and piss you off :p
DG: *laughs* hands me vip card thing.
Regalia: whats this for?
DG: blah blah blah vip party.
Regalia: ok cool, thanks alot!
DG: It's to get then new vip card for 09...blah blah blah.

As we get our coats checked, I immediately wanted to get away from the large pua group. Today was NOT going to be a chode crystal night so Link and I ran off quickly to open sets. I used " Hi like cheese", I was doing this to get me warmed to to really open sets. After about 5 or so with none really hooking, I was ready to begin the night. I bounced with Crusade to open sets ( he said he'd wing me) cool. So he told me to use the "who lies more men or women opener" I thought to myself, " Shit this is so canned" We walk up to a 3 set.

~~~~I'm only posting the relevant sets for this night~~~~~~~~~~~~

SET 1
Regalia: Hey my friend and I were having an argument, who lies more men or women?
HBpeircing: Umm I dont know how much men lie since im a girl?
Crusade: Oh comon thats not a good answer!
Regalia: Yeah your probly lying about that right now!
HBP: Oh yeah sure guys.
Regalia: Oh yeah lets ask your friends since you cant be trusted. "Hey You two, my friend and I were having an argument, who lies more men or women?"
HB1: I think women lie more, were also better at it.
HB2: Im not too sure.
Crusade: Pssh they cant be trusted neither
Regalia: Yeah these girls are all liars!
HBP+HB1+HB2: *body language turn away

we eject.

SET 2
I see a single girl walking towards me, she wasnt the hottest but meh what do i got to lose?

Regalia: Hi I like cheese?
HB5: what? cheese?
Regalia: Yeah I like it, My name is Regalia
HB5: Im XXX
Regalia: Cool What are you celebrating tonight?
HB5: nothing really, just came with friends.
Regalia: oh cool wheres your friends?
HB5: I dont know?
Regalia: Cool lets go find them!
HB5: okay!

at this point i was like...uhh i dont feel like following her so I ditch. Later on in the night I saw her a couple times and she kept calling me the "Cheese Boy" ~hook for sure. But I didn't pursue it any further, because I didnt see a point.

SET 3 ------MOST IMPORTANT OF NIGHT

This was my highlight of the night. A hired gun HBblonde 8 was giving out tickets for her dance promotion shit (they were preforming at union sometime in the future).

Regalia: Ohhh free stuff can I have one?
HB8: yeah here you go!
Regalia: Ohh give me more!
HB8: *hands me 2 more*
Regalia: ok now give me all of them
HB8: No ahahha *laughs*
Regalia: aww your mean!
HB8: noo i only have these 4 left for the rest of the night.
Regalia: Oh lame....Hey I have something cool to show you, its a personality test! *does cube, and she eats it up!*
HB8:* laughs* humm come have a drink with me!
Regalia: I dunno....
HB8: its on me!
Regalia: hot dog! lets go *hugs her*
We get to the bar and have to wait like a bajillion minutes. So heres a good time I think to build rapport. * I run ring routine* (she again eats it up and asks what her ring means i tell her)
Regalia: So you work for union huh?
HB8: nono, im part of a group of dancers and were performing here.
Regalia: dancers huh? sounds awesome!
HB8: You have to come now that I gave you those tickets!
Regalia: I dunno, your not that cool :p *pat her on head*
HB8: Oh comon...!
Regalia: So do you just dance? or goto school?
HB8: yeah im in education at grant mac.
Regalia: Cool!
HB8: what about you?
Regalia: you have to guess!
HB8: physics?
Regalia: Im terrible at math guess again.
HB8: I already guessed, how many chances do I get?
Regalia: 2 more, ill give you a hint, healthcare.
HB8 your a nurse!
Regalia: Oh wow your good! *hugs* you deserve a kiss *kiss on cheek* (I could tell she was kinda unprepared for it SHIT)
HB8: Hey do you drink sour jack?
Regalia: yeah sure!

we cheers and drink. Shes about to leave

HB8: well it was nice meeting you!
Regalia: wait, your really awesome can I get your number?
HB8: I dont give out my number (WTF! SHIT LIES!)
Regalia: oh thats cool, nice meeting you.

Eject. The rest of the night was blah.

You get up, YOU'RE about to leave. (You want to be the one leaving.)

You: Hey, it was great meeting you. I guess you're cool enough. It's a shame we'll never get to know each other better.

(Works really well after you've done the 100% Perfect Girl story)

Just remember to NEVER ask her for her #.
Always say something like:
"If I need you in the future how do I contact you?"
"How can I be sure I'll see you again?"
you may need to adjust to your liking, but the poin't
is to make her think it was her idea and she WILL
always give you the right #. This makes her say
'OH! I could give my #, messenger, e-mail, or whatever."
This is also a Last minute time constraint.
She is supposed to feel like she might otherwise never
see you again. This is the BIGGEST (IOI) for # closing.

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BE The Game!

Heh, pretty good one with the last girl, tho you kinda botched it at the end. Too bad but who knows what would happen eh?

Never kiss the girl first, always get her to kiss you instead (not talking about THE kiss close, just flirt stuff). Not to mention, where you kinoing first at all? Kissing her before ever even touching her is a big turn off for most girls, even on the cheek. A great thing would have been, when you told her she deserved a kiss, then you turn your face and smile and put your finger on your cheek to show her where! =) They love that!

Reading thru it, it seems like the awkward kiss thing was probably what turned her off and sent her packing. I think she would have stayed thru the drink otherwise, but of course its hard to tell from just a text description.

I did kino a bit throughout the interaction, I just think I didnt do enough of it. Thanks for your feedbacks!