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| Dr.Gonzo | PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:10 am | |
| Offline | | MPUA Forum Enthusiast | Joined: Tue Sep 30, 2008 6:49 am Posts: 48 |
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| jurupa | PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:51 am | |
Joined: Sun May 18, 2008 8:18 am Posts: 3102 Location: OC, California | | Not to sound like a total dick, but your about me basically sucks. You start off somewhat well but then after you say I may hate you, you drop the ball. I was expecting a reason to hate you like you getting all the girls or something. Instead you say your adventurous. Nothing wrong with that, but you have to continue with the alpha male persona or at least the C&F. Everything else seems to be good. You may want to personalize your page some tho.
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| RTTastic | PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 8:19 am | |
| Offline | | MPUA Forum Enthusiast |  | Joined: Mon Jan 19, 2009 2:31 am Posts: 73 Website: http://ww.rinstudios.com | | I agree. Personalize the theme (colors, etc), and the intro is a bit disjointed. As is said above, why wouldn't I like someone who is adventerous? And then at the end "Don't mess with the people I care about" seems a bit defensive. "mess with my homies and I'll beat you up!" Why would I want to mess with anyone you know? Why even bring it up? or even say something along the lines of "I am highly protective of those that I care about." puts a more positive spin on it.
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| Hopeless Romantic | PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 5:16 am | |
| Offline | | MPUA Forum Addict | Joined: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:14 pm Posts: 292 | | Try to get girls to comment you more. You had one comment on there about a girl refusing to do sexual favors for you. I'd take that off, its a DLV _________________ Men fall in love with their eyes. Women fall in love with their ears.
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| aflifer | PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:24 pm | |
| | | I don't like your about me section, it has alot of you qualifying yourself, but I like the amount of pre selection you have,
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