look guys i was wondering if you could give me some help on my profiles and tell me what you guys think, like what i need to change to convey sexiness or this and that? ill give you the links

here please be brutally honest

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id= ... ef=profile

www.myspace.com/reder02

You can't have your profiles set to private if you want people to look at them and help you with them.

well honestly... if i were a girl, i would say ur just another meathead thats full of himself, with no dept. this is because: the majority of your pics are of only YOU. You gotta have pictures up of you and friends hanging out and having a good time. You have to portray yourself as an object of sex, doing so using social proof. Yeah, maybe have one picture of you taking a picture of yourself, and just have a witty (cocky/funny) caption on it. I'd say you're an alright looking dude, you just have to use the choice of pictures you use to your advantage.

good point i never saw it that way.... i will be sure to get my camera out this weekend lol

haha you have Yelle as your music! Nice choice, unique.

so should i get rid of all those pics of just me then, or just add more of me with ppl?

if it was me, i would just limit the amount of self shots. i've personally had to cut back on my page as well. if you have solo shots, try to make them unique. with more to focus on than just yourself (ie: landmarks in background, snowboarding, random objects, etc...). and definitely don't forget those shots hangin' with friends and having fun!

in the end, she will know you are good looking without having a lot of self-images. so try to build a story about who you are with your pictures.

one other idea, personal opinion, i would kill the bold yellow fonts. kinda tough to read.

good luck on the myspace hunting bro!

- chance

thanks man im gonna revamp them soon

Good work.
This is what i was looking for. I am thinking of trying online sarging and could really use some more examples to get me started.

It seems to be a decent profile. I would recommend a different background, however. Those dog tags make it difficult to read the text.

Happy Sarging.

You need a different background. It also apears that your trying WAY to hard to look cool. There are no "natural" pictures toss some randomness into the mix.

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i just changed them up