i always see this girl who works for the past 4 weeks now, we kinda smile catch eyes but nothing...sooo this was the way i was gonna do tomorrow or thurs (depending on your thoughts)

(M)- why is it every time i come here...i always just happen to see you on the exact same days?....are you umm...stalking me? -smile-
(M)- im just kidding whats your name?
(HB)-christina...
(M)-im michael,
(M)i have to get back to helping my grandma shop in a bit, but seriously i always come here in a rush, trying to help my grandmother with her shopping list,but i always manage to see this girl with a cute smile, doing misc. things, and i never have the time to say hello, and introduce myself. So ya i thought i'd take time to say...
(M)- wait..smile for me real quick?

-if she doesn't comply-
(HB)-i dont know...
(M)- (come on)
(HB)-that weird...
(M)- (i gotta see something)
(HB)- (smiles)

if she DOES comply

(HB)- (smiles)

(M)-yup your the girl, so ya i'd thought i'd take some time to say finally say hello.
(HB)-oh hello [giggles or laughs or whatever]
(M)-im not gonna get you in trouble or anything if i talk to you real quick do i?
(HB)-i dont know, yes,maybe
(M)-oh ok good/well i better hurry/
(m)-ya this one time my ex girlfriend used to work at target, and i used to go visit her from time to time, bring her coffee when she was tired. So ya were talking about my birthday, im helping her stock the shelves, when her boss just wields around the corner,face red, and starts yelling at her, that shes fired, to just go home right now. u know im a little shocked i was just helping her stock the shelves, and all the sudden she gets fired.
(M)- so ya i dont want to have a deja vu moment haha
(HB)-whatever her response may be
(M)- ok im gonna ask you a question alright?
(HB)-oh ok (not sure how she will react)
(M)-ok you gotta answer it within 5 secs, tell me the first thing that comes to mind ok
(HB)-ok go...
(M)- what was the most exciting interesting thing you did this past weekend?

-nothing
(M)aww what, you had a boring weekend?
(M) [kino shoulder]-ya i kinda thought you were the shy boring type when i first seen you
(M) haha
(M)-no seriously though what happened none of your friends were available

-says something
(M)-hmm i dont know, i've heard better...i thought you were that cute fun type, now your making me think otherwise
(M)-[kino shoulder] haha its ok

-if weekend was fun-
(M)- so ya i should go track down my grandma, but before ---take out phone--- i go how about you give me your digits, i can shoot you a text, and see if we can arrange something. Maybe give you another fun weekend.

-if weekend was boring-
(M)- so ya i should go track down my grandma, but before ---take out phone--- i go how about you give me your digits, i can shoot you a text, and maybe we can actually give you a nice weekend, so you can answer that question again.

NUMBER CLOSE!!

sounds very planned

she might say something that might mess the whole thing up that you wernt prepared for

but you seem to have it all worked it seems

i say just be yourself,

oh and maybe say "put your digits in my phone" instead of AFC asking

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I see a few holes in this... the stuff about always going to help your ex stock shelves or bring her coffee seems kinda AFC and needy to me and I think I would say I'm doing my grandma's shopping for her cuz there is a good chance she will run into you again in the store and you will be without your grandma, now you've just shown you lie... just my opinion, but HEY!! What do I know, I'm pretty new to this whole damn thing anyway!!! lol

Don't be so dependent on your planning. I have done my share of planning in the past and have it backfire when something unpredictable happens like her friend comes along or she says she just met someone.

What I'm saying is don't get so consumed with planning but work on your adaptability in any situation.

I agree with what has been mentioned so far. Pre-planning like you are doing is usually telegraphed, and things can fall apart if something unexpected happens.

Also, going for a number close so soon usually is unsuccesfully or will result in flaking more often than not.

What I would recommend, drop the entire thing and stick with your usual material. For an opener you can use an opinion opener, but for day game like this I usually go with the classic "I know this is a little random, but I had to tell you that you are really cute." It's never not opened for me, no matter who it was to. However, as mentioned, any opener will work fine. (if you're one of those folks who believe showing any interest, no matter what the situation is, is bad)

I then would just do a few simple DHVs, the story about shopping for your grandma would work, and then would move into a single quick gambit. I usually go with Style's 5-lies. Something simple like "If I win, hook me up with your employee discount" If they say they don't have one or they can't I'll say something like buy my milk then... just something simple though, can be anything.

Then... I do nothing, no number close attempt, no nothing smile talk for a little longer and move on. Remember, you know where she works there's no need to rush to number close... take your time to build that rapport then go for the number close. More than a few times they number close me. (A good line I use when I go back to the store and "bump into" her is "You again! What the hell, it's like you work here or something.")

ya i see what your all saying, but more so what this was wasn't so much im gonna read it from a script, it was more of what i was "THINKING" of or revolving around that. of course im not gonna just stick to that, what if a lady interrupts and im like fuck...
lol
it was more a sort of "GUIDELINE" persay the blueprints, the foundation of a routine in day game...

i was in the store last week this employee kept "following me" i used NOTHING up above, but i kidna remembered certain things i should be saying, dhv stories etc. and just remembering the routine ABOVE, helped me structure a new on the spot routine. make sense?