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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 6:59 pm 
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keep in mind me and this girl are friends but i think its the first time i have ever talked to her? just let me know what you think this is like my second attempt at online gaming. BTW i made up that tie your shoes opener it works liek a charm!


Kevin
hey im in a hurry and need you to answer a quick question
how did you learn to tie your shoes....little bunny and the tree, or loop swoop and pull?

1:34pmJenny
definitely loop swoop and pull, i wasn't in to that singing stuff.
haha

1:34pmKevin
singing stuff?
i never sang
and i was a bunny and tree guy
but i figured you for loop swoop and pull...

1:35pmJenny
hm
lol okay

1:35pmKevin
i didnt seem that creative enough to actually imagine the bunny and have fun with it
were you part of the math club lol

1:36pmJenny
no, i played sports

1:37pmKevin
no shit me to
i liked kick ball
and jungle gym races
you know the FUN stuff

1:37pmJenny
we played keep away
the boys could never catch me
i was too fast

1:38pmKevin
i see...so you didnt like to share
thats no good

1:38pmJenny
no, i shared with the girls

1:38pmKevin
i would have shared my lunch with you!
you probably would have just taken my snack pack
before i could offer

1:39pmJenny
probably
but i might have given you my banana or something

1:39pmKevin
well in that case
we would have been best friends
i love bannanas
maybe we could have tag teamed it and dunked the bannana in the chocolate snack pack!
GO TEAM!
lol

1:40pmJenny
wow, that woulda been a good idea
ha

1:41pmKevin
yeah see thats were the bunny method comes in
im the creative one in the group
your the problem solver
you do my math and i create fun things for us to do

1:42pmJenny
i hate math lol

1:42pmKevin
no you dont, you just dont want me to think your a nerd
your tryign to hard to make me like you!

1:43pmJenny
i'm smart, i'm just not a nerd
not at all

1:43pmKevin
i already said we are friends

1:43pmJenny
i don't know you
lol

1:43pmKevin
well we must some how we are friends on facebook
and i just dont add ppl i dont know
you were probably at some party i was DJing at or somewhere my old band was playing
you might give away your friendship like that but i dont

1:45pmJenny
i dont know if we've ever met to be honest

1:46pmKevin
thats to bad
well ill start carring a snack pack around ALL the time and you carry a bannana everywhere you go!
IF we meet up then we know exactly what to do
:):)

1:47pmJenny
lol okay

1:48pmKevin
im going to delta at 4
i will have mine
just keep your half in your purse

1:51pmKevin
well i got to get going but this weekends a big weekend for me and the crew if your fun and spontanious you should stop out
but if youd rather stay at home and do math
i totally understand

1:52pmJenny
definitely what i'd rather do
lol'
yeah, right

1:52pmKevin
well whats the digits ill txt you were we are at bring your girls out for a good time
probably down Hamilton st

1:53pmJenny
245-****

1:53pmKevin
you go to mienbergs

1:53pmJenny
i have, yeah

1:54pmKevin
well we might hit up there or the pub, maybe if my boys are down in east lansing we will hit up excell, which is the craziest club ive ever DJed at
see you this weekend i have to cook and vaccume :):)

1:54pmJenny
okay see ya


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 7:24 pm 
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Nice job handling the "I Dont Know You" call out. You should've probably got off the opener.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 7:47 pm 
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what would you have done instead of re-looping back to the opener?


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:20 am 
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DHV story? maybe ask an opinion opener? play the cube game

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from my POV your game is brilliant. relooping the opener was genius. I was going to say it isnt going anywhere but you got her number? it looks like you have extremely tight texting game which is good.


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:50 pm 
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that was on facbook messanger, my txting game is okay but i think it needs work i still need help trying to be CF soemtimes on txting sometimes i almost drop the string lol


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