Has anyone ever used the taxi brakedown story??
Im not sure were i heard it but ive used it in my game and its worked wonders..

Me-How did u get here??
HB-Got the bus...why?
Me- I got a taxi here right and we was going down (name of a popular busy road near you) and we broke down!! So i was sat in tha back of this cab like wtf should i do?! so i got out and asked the taxi driver if he needed a hand so he asked me to push his taxi!
HB- haha omg really??
Me-Just imagine seeing that! Me and *name of taxi driver* PUSHING a friggin taxi up the (name of road)!
HB-haha giggle blah blah
Me-Oh it gets better we pushed it into a side street so we could call a pickup for him and he turns around to me and has the cheek to say "£5.90 please mate"
HB- hahah blah blah
Me- HE tried to charge me for pushing his taxi with him!!
HB-OMg what did you do?
Me-I just stood there and stared him in the eye for like 20 seconds and just said "i aint giving you shit" and as i walked of he started cursing me in arabic!! i was sooo pissed off!!
HB- haha awww ur so nice lets go and fuck

haha that last line was abit of a exaduration but i did end up F closing her and she had a BF
But ive used this DHV story a few times and its worked.

Just wanting some positive critisism
Improvments
Ideas how to change it etcc

Cheers
(i think i 1st got the idea of keys to the VIP)

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Using other peoples' stories is lame. Are you saying nothing interesting has ever happened throughout the course of your life that you could actually use instead? Besides, if it worked so well for you that one time, why do you need ideas on how to change it? If it ain't broke, don't fix it.

One- If i didnt tell you it was someone elses story you wouldnt of had a clue. So "lame"isnt really how i would put it. If i didnt tell you it was someone elses chances are you would be giving me props on it.

Two- If you looked i was asking for positive critisism or anyways to improve it as im sure there might be a few flaws in it. None of your responce was positive.

Three- I want to know what you think of the story how i got it has nothing to do with it all. what im bothered about is do you think its a good way of showing DHV

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I think it is pretty good, just might need to slip into it a bit better going from how did you get here? to the story. Cause she might not give you the right response. Id say something lik:

PUA: did you get a taxi here?
HB: nah I got (lift, bus, taxi, boat, ferry etc.)
PUA: did you go down (insert busy road)
HB: No i livce at bla bla bla
PUA:You wont believe this shit but I wa geting a taxi going down (that road) and [insert story] (same ending as yours)

or

PUA: did you go down (insert busy road)
HB: Yes
PUA: holy fuck did you see a guy pushing a taxi
HB: no
PUA: [insert story]

But yeah thats pretty good

Far too intrusive. FAR too intrusive. Why not instead ask her what she thinks of taxi service? Change this to he payed you.

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V1V

V1V, that advise is far better than the original. You don't want to creep up on a girl and open with "how did you get here?"

ahhh cheers lads used both suggestions and they both worked a treat
yer i think the original was abit intrusive thanx or the help......anyone fancy feild testing it aswell and seeing the responce??

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Actually yes. Im going to. Im going to make some serious changes in it though. Im stealing the taxi part. thats it lol.

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V1V

Tell me how it goes mate

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yeah. i field tested the original and then the v1v variation and the latter was much better! ended up kiss closing

Yer i found v1vs to be far better and it seemed less intrusive and needy it was a great improvment i think
Ive started using his improvments all the time now

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Used it today outside work (bearing in mind i work in fucking burger king. Super cool peacocking and DHV - sarcasm )
I K closed, got the digits. We meetin up next weekend.
Thanks for the taxi idea dude.

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V1V