Background: We make out for a while at a party and before I leave she takes my phone and enters her name in it so I can't see what she's typing. She put in her name as "Hot Sara."

I wait 2 days and text her.

Looc: "Hot Sara!" LOL! That's cute but i've got news for you. It takes more that pretty blue eyes and good kissing to earn that title.
Sara 6:06: Ahaha oh hello Looc!! :) so do tell, what else does it take?
Looc: Psh... :-) do you really think i'm going to just tell you?! Ha! That wouldn't be any fun.
Sara 6:28: Aww booo...
Looc: Aww don't lose heart. I know you have what it takes.
Sara 6:56: Ohhh dang...whatre u doingggg
Looc: Working @ ******
Sara 7:02: U work at ******???
Looc: Lol ya in the studio remember.
Sara 7:08: Ohhhh yesssss. Haha i'm druuuunk
Looc: Oh whatever! Don't try and blame it on the alcohol. I know that flute players are by nature, a little slow. It's ok tho. It's actually kinda cute. ;-p
Sara 7:19: Aww ur a mean person! Boooo!
Looc: I'm not mean i'm playful
Sara 7:23: Oh is that what u call it? Haha...
Looc: That's ok if you don't see it as play. I'll just have to discover a different way to be playful with u.
Sara 7:36: Nooo its cute. Haha
Looc: That's what i thought, but don't think that will stop me from uncovering more ways to play with you
Sara 7:52: Haha...oh ure very bad mister looc...shouldn't u be working???
Looc: I am! Wanna hear (music)? [I almost wrote "I am so quit distracting me!]
Sara 8:23: Yaaaaa
Sara 8:25: Wait...I just read that text. i'm a good kisser?
Looc: Wow. Sara. Wow. Scaring me a little
Sara 8:37: What did i say??
Looc: Before, i was jsut kidding about flutes being slow, but now i don't know. I at least thought u guys could read! LOL! :-D
Sara 8:45: Aww ur not very nice.
Looc: Ya i know. What can i say. Anyway my battery is low so i have to communicate sparingly.
Sara 9:49: Okydoke...whatre u doing...?
Looc: Chillin in Laguna Beach. U? (hindsight i should not have added the "U?")
Sara 9:55: Chillin in capistranoooo
Looc: Those extra "o"s at the end make it sound like ur all excited being in capistrano
Sara 10:12: Its fun times. Whatre u doing in Laguna?
Looc: Havin a good time playing music, but it's a total sausage fest over here
Sara 10:20: Yea here too (not what i wanted to hear)
Looc: What kind of people? Music undergrad guys? (I'm a graduate)
Sara: Lol mostly. But im thinkin about uuuuu... (bingo)
Looc: What about me do you think about?
Sara 11:09: That kiss...
Looc: that kiss you almost didn't get because of your little last minute resistance game? Ya i liked it too, especially your... Well, actually i'd rather tell u face to face
Sara 11:25: Nooo. I wanna know
Looc: And i'll tell u... next time i see u. I promice.


Alright. Let me have it. Pick it apart. What was good? What was bad?

Dude, Awesome! way to go!

strong work

lots of good negs in there, kept her hooked

way to do work.

way to long for a text conversation.

You could have covered all this with 1 phone call in 3 minutes.

Try Hard.

go, go, go, go shawty itsya birthday
V1V

legend mate! pure sterling game!

bahahahhahahahahaahaha

DITTO

The text was all good, better than myself, but what happened next?