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here are a couple of neggs

mike: i heard you can make people laugh

her: how????

mike: cause you have that fucking cute ass accent

another

(in the car driving)
mike: lol wait hold up....do that smile again

her:what smile (she giggles)

mike: that smile, it looks like that of the gerber baby

They're alright, but it seems like they are individualized to a specific woman that you have gamed, rather than a general canned neg. Which is good, negs are meant to be individualized, that way they hit harder. It's good that your writing your own, too often PUAs rely too heavily on canned material.

yea I guess I mean you can switch the negg up a lil though....like that gerber baby comment something like that you can you mutiple times

The Disqualification theory is basically used to create Active Interest*, directing outwards from the Target towards you. Overuse and vague discussions about the various disqualifications are not only absurd but they are also not useful. Its like you are an English Literature student, and you are making sentences and going up to your instructor/professor/teacher and showing Random sentences to them.
Now ofcourse, examples on the disqualifications/NegHits are abundant, and you can look into them just to get acquainted to the concept. Using canned or Pre-Scripted NegHits is neither a good or a bad thing, but at times a not very experienced may tend to mix up, get confused, and recite an irrelevant Neghit, which will not only decrease attraction, but will convey negative personality and you will come across as not an Ideal guy.
Neghits should be based on the Comment/Observation frame.
Also, Negs should be, but not limited to, used in cold approaches. Starting off with a neg in a warm approach can be a potentially wrong route to take.


Also, as you said, 'in the car'? Using a neghit on someone you have already comforted(She's in your car) isn't a clever thing to do. At this point of time you should be building Rapport and Comfort so that you can escalate later on. But if you've just met her, for example take a case of someone you're dropping off somewhere, then you just make a casual comment and follow it up with a disqualification in an amusing and a non fronting way, here's an instance :
' Hey thats a really cute T, i mean totally masculine. ' She says something, or even if she doesn't , follow it up with ' I totally need to borrow that from you :p ' .
This way you come across as a fun person, and you convey positive personality by being funny.

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Suhel.

Also, the disqualification theory is used to convey Active Disinterest* to the target, so that you come across as someone not sexually interested in her, in order to disarm her natural defence mechanism.
Using profanity in a Neghit is unwise. However if the situation or surroundings require of permit or favor the use, then ofcourse you can, take a Club with people intoxicated with alcohol for instance.

Hope this helps

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Suhel.

here are some great NEGs:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/4939575/How-t ... ase-a-Girl

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