So this is what I have come up with so far

*This is an example from a live 1 set, my friend introduced me to this girl.

Me: Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy (big smile on my face. I have a hard time not smiling.....all the time)
She: Hi
*Handshake*
Me: Thats a cool hair style..*pause*..if you're living in the 50s.
She: laughs and jokes along with it.
Me: I got to get back to my friends.
Me: So what did you want to be when you were 7? (Mehows material)
Her: A doctor
Me: A doctor at age 7? that is a ridiculos ambition for a 7 year old...most girls i talk to want to be a princess at age 7
Me: Do you know what I wanted to be at age 7?
Her: What?
Me: A boxer. ( I couldnt think of anything LOL) I use this to throw very playful punches (I'd say more like shoulder taps) at her in a joking way

From this point on i just vibe, while trying to drop hints of value all while trying to kino escalate.

Am i missing any key parts? I don't seem to have any real attraction phase here except for the initial love/hate neg.

Is there anything I should be doing before I jump into the first question to demonstrate more value? I feel like I jumped right into comfort by asking that question instead of building attraction.

I am going to a social for one of my friends companies this friday so I want to be really prepared. Last year at this same event one of my buddies got a bj behind the building in the parking lot. I want to do the same this friday LOL.

-Josh

not bad nice and playful, a good start

I don't think you are using really good A1 material there. I would use that more in A3/C1. A1 material works best if it has to do with the surroundings, the situation or something that she can find relevant to the moment. There also wasn't really much of a stack there, if I read rightly, you kinda just smashed that question out there.

I don't know about "heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy" as an opener. Kinda sounds like you're trying to pick her up. Although the hairstyle bit could be used I guess. As long as it isn't preceded by too many 'y's.

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true. you have a point. i felt like i was missing a lot of the early phases of attraction.

The "Heyyyyyy" was more of a friendly enthusastic "Hey!". but i can see why it make look stupid to be over enthusiastic.

Can i get some suggestions of some good a1 material? Can you give me an example of how to include the surroundings better.