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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:23 am 
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so tell me where i need to improve and some general advice.
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from: stevo

haha yeeea, im getting judged alot these days
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from: hb9

hahahha at least your half naked so i wouldnt judge you thaaaaat much (inside joke, basically you only get judged when ur naked )
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:49 PM



Wow, Thats exactly what a stalker would say to make myself feel "Safe".

They are like..I am not the stalking type. Then next thing I know your in my bushes watching me walk to the mailbox to get my mail in my boxers. Just to let you know I am on to brandi!


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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:47 PM


haha that wont happen dont worry
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:43 PM


yea i no but the last thing i need is another stalker :)

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:42 PM


oh ya your the funnniest for sureeeee
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:37 PM


their both pretty different rogers chill. mike is funny... but im funnier right??
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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:23 PM


aw really well ya he is pretty hot but idk i kinda like roger to
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:17 PM


yea its mike, he's kinda obsessed with u. Do u like him?

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:04 PM


ummm steve really random haha frank no. um bob probly not.
so i guess its roger or mike. um im gunna guess mike?
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From:stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 3:56 PM


haha k..

steve
bob
frank
roger
mike
(random names)

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:06 PM


haha true. idk how bout you name five people and i guess who it iss???

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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:02 PM


srry its not as funnn.

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:01 PM



ummmm just tellllll me hahha
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:00 PM


yeaaa

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 12:56 PM


guesses of who i think it is?
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From: stevo
Date: Jun 8, 2008 12:23 PM


k u have 5 guesses and ill tell u if ur rite

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From: hb9
Date: Jun 8, 2008 11:35 AM


haha yess whoo?

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From: stevo
Date: Jun 7, 2008 11:10 PM


hey i no someone who likes u.. want a hint?


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:49 am 
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I think that it was really good towards the end where you called her a stalker. however, i didnt really like how you started to talk about other guys becuase then it seemed kinda like you were giving her ideas and it seemed kinda weird how she just went out and was like "that guys hot." But that might have been stuck in there to make you jealous. overall i think you did a good job.


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