If she intends on going put her on the list for the DHV to yourself. Then you can give her negative body language later which is more effective. No need making her stand outside, after all she is a lady.

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thanks j for smoothing things out!

You're welcome good sir!

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smooth bro, lets say you use the line "You're attractive, but do you have any personality?" but the girl doesnt answer, so now what? I just want an alternative if it dosent work not that i dought it but you know!

Well if the girl doesn't answer there really isn't much we can do about it. If we send her another message immediately it looks needy. So my suggestion is to wait a week and send her something else. If a catchy one sentence message doesn't work, I typically type something longer showing interest in the target, and building comfort with statements based on her profile, website, or whatever you have to go off of. I do this because I want to rule her in or out immediately and not play games, I've already wasted a week. It's time to be up front about why I'm attracted to her and see if she feels the same way or not.

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ic where your going with this. Would you mind to give me a quick example please. I hate to ask ya but i learn faster when i see an example.

appreciate it.

haha so I see her sign onto match like everyday but she hasn't replied back. So is it safe to say "game over"? =) That girl was smokin hot, too hahaha

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Yeah It's Game Over man insert another 25 cents.

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Hey thanks alot for doing this J Smooth.

I wrote this summary for my online dating profile and I was wondering what you thought I could do to make it better.

I want to get a business degree because I have always wanted to
open a business. I have been a caterer for 4 years and its great
because my job is somewhere different every time with hundreds of
new faces each time. I'm thinking of opening a business in the
catering industry, and make it easier for the caterers . I have a
dog and hes the best in the world. Hes a mix and I'm only certain
that he has pit bull in him. I'm happy that he's neutered. I like
entertaining movies. I really like zombie movies, it was something
from when I was a kid. I saw night of the living dead and it blew
my mind. There are some that are'nt good like the new Day of The
Dead. They shouldnt have made the zombies super human. It worked
for the new Dawn of The Dead but not it. I don't like country or
R&B. I listen to Indie Rock in my car. Some day I want an
airplane. You feel so free flying an airplane. I want to fly one
through the rocky mountains, the brazilian and costa rican forests,
and the african savanah. I'd like to use an airplane for my way of
transportation. I like to go camping. I want to go camping and take
a jetski and atv. Have a weekend for getting close to nature and
telling stories at a campfire. I like the outdoors. I feel my inner
cave man when I live in nature.

You're welcome! Wow, you really gave me a lot of information in that post. Try to break it up a bit. It seem like a lot of thoughts chopped up and thrown together. Try to make it flow a little more. Something like....

"After spending years in my career as a caterer and loving what I do. I have decided to persue my business degree so that I can open up my own catering business and revolutionizing the process for the caterers in the field...... "

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That was a great sentance, I dont know if I made any to that high grade but I think I made it flow alot better.


Ive been catering for a few years now. I like how the purpose of it is to have a party and good time. I want to open up my own company in the catering industry and make it a lot better. Especially for the employees lol.

The only movies I like are good ones. Among these are zombie movies. When I was 7 my mom rented Night of TheLiving Dead for me and it blew my mind. Its something about living through that horror. Ever since then I saw every zombie movie made.I liked the last Dawn of The Dead even though the zombies ran fast. The last Day of The Dead was a disaster. They shouldn't make the zombies super human and able to crawl on ceilings.

I use to camp with my family in Montana with jet skis it was so awesome. I like the feeling of being in nature. We use to tell stories and jokes around a fire. It was Montana so the sky was an ocean of stars. Then wed eat hot dogs and smores before we'd go to our tents.

I don't like country or RandB. I listen to Indie Rock in my car.

I think it would be so amazing to have an airplane. I want to fly over the wild places on Earth. I would fly over Brazil, the rocky mountain range, Costa Rica, and Africa. It would be so cool to use it for transportation too and fly it to the middle of a national park if you're allowed to and camp.

Much better!

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Thanks your advise helped a lot. It took some effort to put that together but I started seeing how I could make it as good as I wanted it. Like there are so many possibilities to go with designing it to to sound more and more awesome. I could have been perfecting it all day. Real eye opener and thanks for the thought. I had an "Aha" moment.

I'M THE 1000th VIEW!!! YAY FOR EXTERNAL VALIDATION =)