Girl 1 & 2: Too soon to be bringing appreciating and passion into it.
Girl 3: Very corny. Very obvious.
There really is nothing wrong with a "Hey

" on Tinder... in my experience girls that don't reply to a "Hey" are the ones who just want to see how many matches they can get for some self-validation. Although interestingly enough I did have a conversation from "Hey" with a girl whose profile explained 'Got a boyfriend, just here for a joke'... Sure... a joke.
I'm not a big fan of Tinder but best interactions usually come from asking a question/making a comment about something in the background of one of their pictures as it suggests you're interested in what they do. If they start to respond with things like "lol" and "ok", call them out on it with a "I feel like you're not that into me haha" and you'll then speed up the process of meeting.