<a href="http://www.myspace.com/rickybutts">Shaky's Page</a>


thanks in advance

You need to mix some women into your top friends. All men says you get together with all your guys a lot but none of you know any women. You have a lot of comments from real friends, so that's a plus.

Ditch that whole "about me/like to meet" thing and start over from scratch. Write something better and at least a little longer. The "about me" is not C&F, it's pretentious and conceited and will make people want to punch you. The "like to meet" sounds like someone trying desperately to make people think he believes he's the shit. Those won't do at all.

Not bad on the sidebars. I like what you said about your mom and stepdad. Girls will like that too, if they read it. I'd drop Peter and Hiro (Peter sucks ass, anyway and is a whiny little fetlocked bitch, but I digress lol), but that probably doesn't matter because a lot of people like that show.

Get a more interesting default pic. Your pupils look all clouded over, like Storm from the X-Men, and everything kind of blurs together in the image.

Though, as I've told others, I don't even advise attempting to meet women online, ESPECIALLY not on Myspace. That's not where the game plays out, and none of the rules apply properly there. I meet girls in the real world and, when I establish contact with them, I friend them on Myspace and now that they KNOW me IRL, I can continue the game and the reinforcement of my persona there. It's a SUPPLEMENT to real world pickups--NOT a replacement.

See the detailed response I just gave this guy.

What's up these days with all the guys tryin to get girls on Myspace?? It doesn't work like that. You waste SO much time and effort and get so little back. It's Saturday night. Get the fuck out of the house. I'm going salsa dancing when I finish this post. There will be women there. Why are you fuckin around on 'space?

Thanks for the response. I changed it up some. I also wanted to say, I am not trying to replace going out. I go out every Friday and Saturday night. I just figured I would try myspace when I am working during the week.

Big improvement. Still need more girls in your top friends...and I didn't click through, but it looks like the two in your bottom row (which are the hottest ones) are probably celebs or singers? That's not a great idea unless you have several more hot girls in there who are real friends.

Good looking myspace page.. and good headline

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What I did to get around the putting tons of women as my top friends thing is put pix of chics I like (celebs w.e.) on my page.... should still keep the idea of women there. Though if you've got pix of you with women in them, that would be even better...post em on the front pg.

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a tad bit plain, and a different profile picture you look kinda weird poking out your head like that...

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Thanks for more feedback guys.

First off, the girls at the bottom are actually friends of mine. I don't have anyone on my list that I do not actually know.

I understand about the pics, I am actually very camera shy, but I am gonna tackle that very quickly and get me more pics up.

I have a meeting with Jennifer "Jennicide" Leigh (www.jennicide.com), hopefully this week, it would be perfect if I could get some pics with her. Will just have to find away to transition from business.

Thanks again for the feedback.