This is my first post. I'll introduce myself in the right forum, suffice it to say I am really new to the PU game. Thought I might be in the right place for some feedback on a recent experiment.

I found this total 10 on one of the major dating sites. Her profile came across as aggressive and I starting saying things to myself like, wow she's hot, I'll never get her, etc.. And then I tried to summons everything I've been trying to learn in MM, The Game and Dave D. and decided "what the hell".

Important things to know about this woman's profile. 36 divorcee, model looks, photos of her all over Europe on vacation, she's searching for man within 5000 miles of her, her profile lays down all the laws for a man, very cocky, insisted on under 40, 5'11', non-smoker without facial hair, says she wants to be pursed but needs her space and personal time, she had a photo of a little white dog. She also says that the last book she read was "The Game" and "...if this describes you....I'll see you coming from a mile away:)."

Now, I don't know why I replied like this but check out my message to her. I wrote this as a total joke and the girl replied right back basically offended and proceeded to "shoot me down", or did she? I'm thinking, "yes", but I thought it was funny and wanted to share and hopefully get some pointers, congratulations or flames.

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Dear Control Freak...

I'm 5'7", part-time smoker and shave when I feel like it.

I'm not really interested in you, but have a friend who is perfect. He will be paroled in 6 to 8 years. Like you, he really enjoys his "me" time.

Don't you have any pictures taken in THIS country? Really?

Since you seem kinda boring, I thought I could offer to spice up your life. I am planning a bank robbery for next month and am in search of a driver so if you let me know what kind of car you have I'll put you on the short list.

Good luck with your [dating site] search. Quick tip. You might want to extend your range to 6000 miles to improve your chances.

IM me at [screenname] (AOL or Yahoo) and I'll give you the number of a really good therapist to help with that personality of yours.

P.S. - You should really consider finding that adorable little white dog a loving home.

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Her reply...

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angry little man syndrome... who doesn't care about his health or the health of anyone in his vacinity *cough*...get a life...click

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So there you have it, now let me have it.

Should I neg her more (she misspelled "vicinity") or take the message that I clearly pissed her off. I could care less about this stranger but I wanted to work on my chops and ask the pros if I'm "on the right track" or "off my track".

Thanks in advance for any replies. It's nice to have a forum to talk about this.

Haha wow.. well I laughed reading your whole post.. I believe you negged the shit out of her. ..a little or a lot too much.. The first part you could've probably gotten away with but you built so much shit up against her and she got defensive. Even though i agree with EVERYTHING you said to her I don't know if I would've called her on it the very first time I opened her... anyways thanks for the laugh awesome post haha

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Here's a few thoughts... these are just assumptions based on the info you gave.

She very likely could be damaged goods. I mean, she makes all sorts of demands and is practically intentionally repelling people from liking her, which may mean she's the type to sabotauge herself.

More than likely, she's damaged... But that's not relevant to the discussion if you're interested in gaming her.

I would say proceed... she's being bitchy and obnoxious, but your initial message was a little bit excessive with the negging and whatnot. Still, I think that you're on the right track and you just need to tweak your method a bit, then you'll be phenomonal.

In the future, I recommend you make your initial posts short and calibrate your negs. In other words, when you through a neg, give it a little bit of a flavor of a compliment. Just a touch... Every push should have a little pull, every pull should have a little push.

Don't read too much into it if this one doesn't fly. Collect more data from more women.

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