Hey, if you've had any success in the online realm, please take a look at my profile and let me know what you think...

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=77795870

Right off the bat.. take out those two photos of you with a girl and making goofy faces. The tree climbing one is good, the bear one is good, the skiing one is good. Keep those and maybe a couple more like that.

Also, I took a really quick look and will look at it closer later, but from a quick glance, you sound kinda cocky. Don't start with the things you will reject girls for, but rather the positive and funny things that make you You. Also, your criteria is just too specific. I get that you're trying to be lighthearted and funny, keep that tone and make it a little more broad and open. I still don't really get a sense of who you are from this.

And yeah the whole "We might be able to become friends" thing isn't working. Also, why are you even using the word friend so much. Isn't it a dating site?

I hate dating sites. I'm not saying it doesn't work, but face-to-face game is where you polish your lance, if you know what am I talkin about.

It's like fishing, you set a trap and wait for some naive creature to fall for it; boring and weak. Pages like these are the reason guys are afraid to approach women.

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Not a bad profile. You should be cleaning up at age 28 with 6'2".

A few things, you seem a bit try hard with the words in your profile. You go too far to try to be funny. Have a few funny and witty remarks. Also DHV with the do not message me if. Rather than say do not message me if you are Sara, say something like "Don't message me if you are a Hooter's girl, it never works out." This tip is from Bravo. Essentially it conveys that you have been with that girl IE preselection.

How do you message these girls?

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I'm definitely not cleaning up.

I'm not really sure I have a strategy when messaging. I usually type them 2 or 3 sentence messages that either ask a question or somehow tease them in a way. Perhaps I should be thinking about this aspect a little more.

I'm not sure though because 95% of the time I send a greeting/hello to a woman, they check my profile. I would think if I was sending awful greetings, they wound't bother checking the profile out.

I will work on the try hardness of the profile tomorrow. Really demoralizing day today though. I must have sent 25 greetings today and over 100 this past week. Not a single date has been set up and only 3 or 4 responses have gotten their initial response. Ugh.

Just saw the pictures... I'd scrap everyone of them except maybe the tree one for filler... They are all too blurry. Take some pictures that actually show what you look like.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XnRxvqQhK-E

Replace "yo yo guy" with "teddy bear guy"

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Interesting feedback. On my phone, all of them are decent except for the tree one. I'd be curious to see if anyone else thinks the tree one is clear and the rest are blurry.

Are you looking at them from your PC or phone?

Some honest cold hard truth feedback.

You obviously live in a different world to hot girls and don't understand how they perceive things. This is the problem with a lot of guys in this community. They have never really been with girls enough and have no social intelligence whatsoever. This profile is horrible and will repel most women. This is why you're not getting anywhere.

You need to wipe the whole thing apart from the pictures where you're hiking and the one where you're up the tree. Then add a few photos of yourself looking dapper in a suit taking care of business or something. Then add a very simple description. This will display a better image and you will get more girls interested in you. I can guarantee by doing this you will get more replies and messages.

You have so much potential and could get layed like a rockstar. You just clearly don't understand...

At the moment you are likely to stumble across a girl who is looking for a guy just for a relationship. The vibe you're profile is giving off is that you are a nice guy who is not very successful with girls and you would be a great candidate for a girl who wants to settle down in her 30's. But hey, what do I know what you want.

No. I like hearing this stuff and I think you're probably right. I'm going to keep working on it. I've gotten a lot of responses from <7's, and older women, so you're right about that. I don't have the necessary pictures right now but I'll see what I can do over the next month or so. Thanks for this man, I really appreciate it.

Glad you didn't take it the wrong way.

"The name is Nathan. When I'm not adventuring out in the wild I'm busy keeping fit and working on my small business."

Would be a better profile description.

On my phone, which has a bigger/clearer screen than most girls are gonna have. The tree one is blurry too, thats why it should be filler. Natural dec gave some good feedback. I'd just add one thing. Dragula has a thread where he says to borrow or rent a good camera and spend some time taking some good clear photos of yourself. Try that too for the new pictures that Natural advised. Edit them as well. Spend a day taking the pictures and tweaking them. I showed a girl when I was looking at the photos. She said same thing, she cant see what you look like and they look kinda goofy.Dragula's thread explains it better than I can. Its in the online section.

Who's we?

Whatever suits your taste. Sitting behind a computer screen all day wont help you get laid, I admire people who are so passive and always looking for a easy way out.

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