I finished watching this vids online about talking to girls online I forgot link but it is all about be creative and being fun. Im not good socially but I tried its real short prob not even close to pickup want all criticism and what you would have done. Also didn't use any material prob should have but here you go.
Me: hey (I know I could have said something more interesting but knew her so)
Her: hey (Take it shes uninterested and at this point I realize should have said something different than hey)
Me: wat u been up to (extra points for being creative

did get one of those emails from gene? (I actually said that in ()'s so gene is boss at work but haven't worked in a while)
Her: shit i havent even looked haha
i pretty much have been partyin
hbu? (at this point Im like shit haven't done anything interesting strict parents you know the deal)
Me: lol u should look unless u found another job? partyin, football, jus kickin it. so drained right now. (Lied but party nvr been to one the "so drain right now is a conversation spike or what ever you call it)
Her: sounds like loads of fun.
no job yet ive applied at tons of places!! haha
im workin on it. then ill have 4 jobs yay (Thinking about using some cocky and funny at this point)
Me: All work and no play. Workaholics are no fun lol.
After that she just logged of I think she might reply tomorrow or later. Well tell me what I could of done differently and what to do if she replies or doesn't. Take into consideration Im only 16 so probably can't meet up with her because parents strict only 2 more years anyway. Also this is my first online convo of being different and not the standard what u do and up to convo.
-BigLo