so basically i need a critique. i mean i know that i failed tonight obviously because i couldnt number close this girl. i want to know what you guys think i did wrong or what i should have done. (i def know what i shuold have done, i just want to hear it from someone else) sorry its a little long

this is how it went down:

me and 3 other home boys go to this guys house for his birthday its a huge mansion. when we get there the party just started. in about half an hour a homeboy of ours rolls up with 3 other girls. in this group of girls i notice one of them thats pretty cute, so i choose her to be my target. when she came she already noticed me because i was dressed much nicer than everyone else there. (long sleeve pin stripe black button up, purple tie to contrast and a white hat.) my first mistake was that i didnt introduce myself from the start, we just keep making eye contact the rest of the night. so now im outside with the homeboy that brought the girls and we were just talking, i asked him whats the deal with the girl, turns out shes talkin to a guy and he was there at the party. i told my homeboy and another girl that if she doesnt have a ring then its whatever. i should have stepped it up, but instead i was focusing too much on myself by walking around starting convos and dhv. i was goin to the bathroom and walked in front of my homeboy and he became the wingman and introduced me to her. i said i noticed her playing guitar hero but negged hee saying she was off beat and did terrible. she started laughing and said something but i walked off to the bathroom. a bunch of drunken incidents occured like fights were about to break out, so i was a bit distracted. this whole time at the party i see her and the guy shes talkin to huggin each other so i didnt get much chance, and everytime a chance some kind of drama broke out. however i did see her looking my way manytimes.

when i had to leave, i said bye to her and try to make a last minute impression, so i asked what her name was even though i already knew and she said she remembered my name so i made a little joke about her guitar hero skills again. i basically took off to drop some friends home. i feel so ashamed for missing a golden oppurtunity. but damn i think the fact that her 'guy friend' was there really blocked me off mentally.

hey man,
just a few things. girls will have guys hanging around with them all the time. dont jump to conclusions just because shes hugginghim or hanging aound with him. i think where u actually went wrong is that u had those expectations of the number close. go out without those expectations, go for fun andentertainment not a kclose or numberclose watevs. if u really have to go up and chat with the chick and if the other guy is distracting u maybe AMOG him so he leaves. giving u the chance to have her to urself

yo just cuz a girl is talking to someone or has a man, doesnt mean they aint interested in you. However your first mistake was waiting to long cuz it seems you dont have enough confidence since you had to ask your friend what good with the girl and just kept making eye contact. If i were you as soon as i saw her i would said wats up to my boy and introduced myself to the girl he brought over(including ur target). Then i wouldve just played it cool since you already made a good impression on her and she is noticing you. Then i would just find her a lil bit later on and make my moves. But never i mean never hang around her all night or continously be looking at her or for her, it make you look desperate, clingy and a lil sketchy. But just try and get her number from ur friend, call her up and remind her who u are and she if she would want to kick it