This is an half-true story, so its much better to work than a totally made up one.

"I was returning from a party, with a male friend and a female friend, witch was an ex of mine, when we passed be 2 ghetto guys. One of them disrespected my female friend, i turned back and told them "Dude, thats not how you do things! You must excuse her", he talked back and then turned around and left. We then turned around...and i felt a rock hitting my leg. When my guy friend saw that, he was shocked, and picked the rock to throw it back at them, but i then told him "calm down! its ok, this is over!", but unfortunatly i was cripple for a few days "

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LOL. Omg. this story makes you look like a chump. I am not sure about where the DHV spikes are in this story. I guess being calm and laid back (while getting hit with a rock) is one. The only other one is that you stood up for the female. But come on. I have a story where I almost got into a fight and my friends where backing me up and I still did not fight. That is more exciting than this.... And you end up cripple LOL funny but not attractive....

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Dont take this personal but the story seems juvenile. Why? Here is why:
-I saw little to no DHV spikes
-It seemed like the two ghetto guys that threw rocks at you were little kids; in turn this is a DLV spike
-Story seem a bit try-hard

Go over the proper material on how to make a good dhv story. Youtube and The Mystery Methond (book) are the two sources i always use when trying to write good stories. Hopes this helps Cheers!

Yup Yup. I thought the same things when reading this. If you say this story to a female, she will probably look at you like you are a chump. That is not what you want. I would want to add something important which is that it is not what you are saying that matters but how you are saying it. You can almost say anything and come off DHVing yourself if you maintain other alpha qualities. But be careful because it is better to be congruent with the content of what you are saying and how you are saying it....

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I don't understand, if you're making up the story anyway, why not say you got in a fight with the guys and you and your friend kicked their asses? I mean at least then you seem like you can protect women and plus it make the story much more exciting.