IM, not exactly the best....good....k Im crap when it comes to dhving, thats why im here tryin to figure it out. But heres a thought I suddenly had while reading. What about a Dhv story about an online girlfriend you met online? Something like... bear with me now Im making this on the spot

STORY: I met this girl online once and we sort of had a weird online relationship for a couple months. This happened back then when I was still nerding it up and spending most of my life on the computer. I didn't really believe she was a girl when we first talked, but one thing led to another and I guess she really liked me cause in no time we started webcamming with each other, and gosh she was a cute one. The first few weeks seemed like a good idea but as time progressed, I decided maybe it was going too well, and ended the relationship, as I believe she was rejecting guys for me and getting really into it. So since then I've been pretty careful around girls I meet, as I don't want that happening again.

I believe this shows a bit of alpha characteristics while at the same time showing you're a caring person? I dont know I made it on the spot... but like I just realized.. this could also fit as an opener. hahaha something about whats your opinion on online dating? and say somethin like this and see what happens.

but yeah.. rate it guys IM STILL LEARNING

There's a lot of things wrong with this story.

1. The whole premise of this story is a DLV. Normal attractive guys don't have to meet people over the internet; they do it in person at bars, clubs, social events, etc etc Online gaming is one of the lowest form of pickup artistry right down there with gaming a prison penpal. If you do it, it is not something you want to openly disclose to other people.

2. The fact that you never actually meet her in person in your story, further brings into question this:
Maybe "she" was a transvestite of some sort. Maybe "she" was some sort of sick sex craved psychopath. You don't know because you never met her in person. So this whole time you could've been cam'ing with a man. Again a major DLV; it shows desperation and makes you look like a pervert.


3. You would considered an online stranger you cam with a "relationship"? The implications make you look desperate, not to mention another major DLV. Again, regular attractive guys have regular in-person relationships. They don't get into "relationships" with strange "girls" on webcams when they could meet a girl in the real world.
4. This isn't a DHV either. This is an assumption about your own importance in this person's life without having any proof. You are an internet friend how can you know if "she" was rejecting guys just to play on the internet with you?


Sorry if this seems harsh. This whole story really puts you in a bad light. It is a DLV and makes you seem desperate and perverted. For your own good do not use this story in the field. I can almost guarantee you will be humiliated and embarrassed if you do.

~Antithesis

this being harsh? of course it is. If I didnt write something as fail as this, how would you be able to give feedback as detailed as that? this post, to me, is a major success.

I'm glad you handle criticism so well. Sometimes you need to try out out the really terrible ideas in order for the golden ones to come to the surface. Don't let this get you down or discourage you from posting up any other ideas you have. We are all here to help each other out.

~Antithesis