TBU: telekinetic bra unhooking

have used this mid game several times to positive results. the target has always been, at the very least, amused and interested in the banter. [newbie confession: i'm skeptical if one can close with a woman who does not show immediate attraction. i've always been pretty good with women but am here to see if i can get the hb10's that have always eluded me. so, i have f-closed with 2 women recently but likely could have done so without any pua knowledge. but with one of these women the TBU routine seemed to have been the turning point from flirtation to sure thing]

the TBU perfectly follows a failed Style ESP test when the target's number fails to be seven. i express true puzzlement and say her kahoaka (aura) is weak and she needs to relax (should note that i only did a quick reading of The Style-endorsed Mastering Your Hidden Self so my Huna/Hawaiin references to target are largely arbitrary and off the mark). This is a good kino opportunity as i take her hands and rest them with her palms upturned on her thighs. I rub her back and pause at her bra clasp and act as though suddenly inspired.

"I got it! want to show you something"
"What?"
"I just realized because of your biochemistry, in your presence i might not be able to read your mind but-and this is unexpected-I am very likely telekinetic. i can unhook your bra from six feet away"
"yeah? this i want to see" (playfully mocking)

i softly trace small circle around her bra clasp and, while maintaining eye contact, step several feet away. i take deep breath, raise a pointed finger, close eyes, have a few seconds of exaggerated concentration, and then open eyes with confident nod. i approach the target. if she says "sorry" i segue into negging her on her weak mana (life force?) and say i now need a massage to relieve tension from my failed charitable efforts. the one woman i f-closed allowed me to proceed with pretending my power was real and thanked me for re-hooking her bra.

i'm sure a seasoned pua could fine tune this but it does seem to bring humor in while showing value (knowledgeable in chick crack if still in need of honing skills) and getting the kino pumped up

any thoughts?