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What do you guys think of this move to bounce with target?
(Grab target somewhere during routine) Listen guys, myself and, wait, what’s your name?
HB: “Name”
Me: Myself and "name" have a surprise announcement to make. It’s so much a surprise that we haven’t even discussed. Do you want to tell them? (Looks at you laughing but blankly) You’re shy? OK, fine, I’ll tell them…We like each other. And in order to celebrate we are going to go grab a drink. We’ll join you guys in a bit, cool?
It's good but the end kinda trails off. It's like a joke with no punch line. You've got the girls attention but you've also invited the whole group into the opener. You play it out pretty well, then at the end you jus' drop 'em & say good-bye. An' i'm sure everyone (HB included) will feel a bit lost. You need to end with a joke. That way the 'audience' will feel satisfied & go about their buissness & the HB will be impressed with it all. Perhaps change the end to:
"... We're in love. And in order to celebrate we have to serinade her with a charming (slightly drunken perhaps) rendision of "I Love You Baby""
That way everyone has a good laugh, and the HB is feeling slighly embarised but very attracted/impressed. Plus everyone knows at least a line of that song lol