Hey guys, I'm wondering if I can get some help with my game. I'm still pretty new to game but I've gone over a lot of theories and books an stuff, but please, tear me apart.

Situation 1:
So I met this girl a long time ago, but we haven't talked since recently. A while back a mutual friend invited her to hang out with us at the theater. She seemed happy to see me and flirted with me a bit. I used a lot of c&f and once I pulled her chair back like she would fall and she hid her finger catchin her balance. She demanded I kiss it better, bit I told her "nah, I don't know where you put your fingers".

Anyway, it's been a few weeks, and she ran into me at school. I used some more Cnf, but it was a pretty dull Convo. I was surprised when she offered me her number. Anyway, here's what I've texted her, I could use help in proceeding.

Me: hey, I just me somebody that looked EXACTLY like you at the (place we ran into each other) there was just 1 difference. She had a cuter but. Only thing is, she was giving you a really bad name. (texted her right after she left so she would have my number)

Her: hahahaha (my name)

Me: we should get together and kick her ass

........ No reply. I texted again a few hours later.

Me: what's up panda butt?

Her: hahaha nm. Just chillin at (mutual friends) house

Me: you? Chillin? That's impossible.

Her: yeahh Hahaha... Why?

Her: are you with (mutual friend)

Me: because your too hot to chill. Seriously, your a fire hazard. And no, I was earlier but she went to work.

Her: hahahaha lol fire!! Sound like.... Hmmmm.. Lol..

Me: lol, sounds like what? Fried chicken?

Her: haha.. Wth! (mutual friend) here

Her: (my name) do you like (targets name)?

Her: habahahah

Me: lol is this (mutual friend)?

Her: yeahh

Me: ya I like her... But I'm not IN like with her

Her: hehehe.. Ah okay.. How come u didn't get my my number?

Me: because I didn't ask. Lol. (target name) gave it to me. No, not like that... Get your mind out of the gutter. She gave me her number silly. What's urs?

No reply.

Wondering how to proceed from here. Just text her tomorrow or something? And please let me know, wha do you think of my game. Please tear me apart, I really want to learn.

I wouldn't have said the "no not like that" part, and i wouldnt have asked her friend for her number. I would have said "cause you haven't impressed me yet" or something like that. No reason to ask for her number, especially on the targets phone.