hey im just wanting some input on this story/ possible dhv i made. chances are its been done before but meh. all input is appreciated

• OMG, you’ll never believe what happened to me the other day. I was out dancing with a couple mates, when I felt a hand grab my ass. Now this wasn’t a soft slap or anything. It was a full blown GRAB and SQUEEZ. Naturally I turned around thinking what the hell is going on, and I was faced with some girl. As soon as I turned she blushed completely and stammered an apology. She said I have the same ass as her boyfriend. That isn’t the crazy part, half an hour later someone else grabbed my ass. What is with you girls and grabbing peoples asses?

im thinking because it involves their opinion i can neg them, but still not sure if i should use it as a dhv. i have some other ones i can use but this is one i want to try out tomorow night

It looks good to me! Go test it

Sounds good, but i think it would get a better reaction if you shortened it.
Remember the main dhv in this story is preselection, so as you've got that accross and said your line at the end you've done your job. Cut the bits you dont need and find what works best.
But then again it depends on how you like to tell your stories, i prefer to keep mine as short as pos.

(drop the OMG bit, it sounds try hard and like you think its a big deal that some girl grabbed your ass)

add a twist to it

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kk will do. i will let you guys know how it works once ive tried it on a few sets.

OMG, you’ll never believe what happened to me the other day. I was out dancing with a couple mates, when I felt a hand grab my ass. Now this wasn’t a soft slap or anything. It was a full blown GRAB and SQUEEZ. Naturally I turned around thinking what the hell is going on, and I was faced with some girl. As soon as I turned she blushed completely and stammered an apology. She said I have the same ass as her boyfriend. That isn’t the crazy part, half an hour later someone else grabbed my ass. What is with you girls and grabbing peoples asses?

its quite good-
with mates shows status
out dancing shows ur out going
women grabbing ass shows pre selection.

the only thing i wud change is the word b/f to a hot guy model. this will make u appear more attracive, plus if people say your ass is like a firneds or b/fs its more of a friend comment and puts u more in the friends zone (its all in magic bullets).

She said i had the same ass as her 'hot guy model'. Common, it does'nt exactly work does it. You dont wanna over do it like 'i was mobbed by a bunch of models, they all hot, they said i was the best guy they've ever met'
You dont make it obvious, she'll know you're trying to impress her and bhost. Just make it a normal storey 'i was walking down (place) and bumped into my ex-girlfriend and she said she had just...' just make sure you get the dhv spikes in and intresting, also fun if you can.

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im not tryna say i know it all cuz im knew at this too"1 year in da game" and i get rejected alot but i occasionaly pull dimes hb 7,8,9,10s, but from all the practice i understand the open game ,what you jus said you can use in any format jus shorten like homeboy said if you talk too much it seems fake or your trying too hard i macked a hb10 jus by going up too her tellin thats someone said my van laces wer dirty and if she thought they wer and took it from der,u can say anything u want to a girl jus be confident,good posture,eye contact,voice tone etc.

Looks good to me man lol

shortened it a fair amount, i tried the model on 2 sets and they both gave me a wierd look like wtf liar. the others it worked on pretty well. good reception and thanks for your help guys

Not sure if I understand you correctly. It worked on one set and failed on another?

I wonder tough if you could also use something similar as an opener. Like this:

Walk pas HB in crowded club.
Go back and say to her: Hey why did you pinch/grab my ass?

She'll probably respond somewhat annoyed "I didn't"
You: Hey don't play the innocent with me, i saw you're hand withdrawing in the corner of my eye. Woman *sigh* all the same. I can't just get drinks for my friends without some of them sexually harassing me...

Hopefully she'll laugh at this. And you might continou with a fun story of one time where a guy did the same (and no that does not make you gay) or something else.

Sorry to go offtopic with this, but just wanted to know what you guys think. Would that work?

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nar what i meant to say was when i said that she mistook my ass for a models it didnt work but when it was just her bf it did. with urs i recon its ok but not to much of a fan of saying ur buying ur friends drinks, sounds like showing beta characteristics. maybe saying buying a round its about time or somthing