OK so after my first horrible texting conversation I went out to some clubs to open, or at least try to open other girls. After about I'd say an hour of this I hit it up with a girl and eventually number closed her. The day after I decided I would text her and her is the conversation.
Me: So I'm luring girls to my house with candy which is better skittles or M&M's?
her: Hahah Mmm M&M's girls love chocolate
Me: Hmmm I was thinking skittles but since u have a little more experience with girls ok. So what music should I play alternitive or RnB?
Her: Lol alternative I think loser
Me: Wowwww what a bully :-O ok so which band coldplay or matchbox twenty?
Her: Matchbox 20! my all time favorite band ever
Me: Ok so M&M's, alternitive and *girls name* favorite band matchbox 20?
Her: Hahah yes....amazingg
Me: ok cool
(short pause)
Me: So *girls name* want some M&Ms
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So I think for the most part this conversation did a lot better then my last one for those who have read it. Now could anyone look over this and give me some ways to make it better?