I went to the club last weekend, so these are the messages I received today. What do I have to work on to get a first date?

Her: Heyy we met at boss on Saturday. ur really tall and i like it baby ;P
Me: Hey, sorry that I missed ur message cause I was working all day!! Ya, I get alot of compliments on my height. By the way, who's this??
Her: It's Tiffany, do u rmbr me from Sat night??
Me: I know u might think I dont remember, but I was pretty sober that night. If I c ur face I would definitely know who u r cause Im bad with names
Me: Hey Tiff, lets go watch the fire works on Sat, lets meet up at 8 infront of xxx
Her: haha, what makes u think I'd go
Me: because I am tall and fireworks are awesome
Her: haha, but u r not
Me: awesome's my middle name
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and it just ended here...
Help me out, I am really not good on the 2nd day game

Her: Heyy we met at boss on Saturday. ur really tall and i like it baby ;P
Me: Hey, sorry that I missed ur message cause I was working all day!! Ya, I get alot of compliments on my height. By the way, who's this??
Her: It's Tiffany, do u rmbr me from Sat night??
Me: I know u might think I dont remember, but I was pretty sober that night. If I c ur face I would definitely know who u r cause Im bad with names Oh! Yes, I remember now. Saturday was such an awesome night!
Me: Hey Tiff, lets go watch the fire works on Sat, lets meet up at 8 infront of xxx
Her: haha, what makes u think I'd go
Me: because I am tall and fireworks are awesome (NICE!) or, you could stay in and read a book and be completely bummed that you didn't get to have fun with me...
Her: haha, but u r not
Me: awesome's my middle name


Firstly, the bold parts should've been left out rather. Especially the part where you're trying to convince her that you were sober or whatever.
The fireworks idea is cool. I like it. I think I would've asked it differently though.
"Hey, I'm going to watch the fireworks on Saturday. Join me."
That shows that you're going whether she joins or not, also the message has a very strong/dominant feel to it. You're not really asking her to join you, you're telling her. I use it very often!

Also, asking a girl to commit to a Saturday NIGHT with a guy she doesn't really know 4 days ahead of the day is a bit much. Girls go for what seems like the most fun at the time, so she's not going to commit to anything on Saturday night yet unless she's absolutely sure that it's going to be awesome. So build more attraction and comfort, get her to go for coffee or something quick during the day (coffee dates, and day-time dates put a lot less pressure on her) and then at the end of the coffee or whatever just say "See you Saturday"[/b]

that makes a lot of sense, now I have to apply it!! Thanks bud!!! What do you think would happen if I just tell her straight up "come over and lets watch a movie" right after she messages me?? I dont want a gf, I just want one night stand

It is far too dynamic to know exactly what she was going to say. Next time be aggressive and just pursue it. I have a free video on my page on text messaging and some valuable knowledge that will help you in the future.

Keep on sargin,

Tim Pierce

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Well the only way to find out is to actually do it. However, I see it going a few ways. Since she doesn't seem to know you very well she may just brush it off and tell you she is busy or whatever. She won't go because she doesn't feel comfortable doing that private 1-on-1 time yet so maybe a public date would be more suitable. I could also see her agreeing to the movie, but then last minute backing out because someone else she knows (maybe a close girl friend) gave her another option for that night.

Maybe that's all entirely wrong. There is a chance she will be all down for it. Like Tim Pierce said, it's dynamic. You just have to go for it and see what she says. I'm just throwing around different scenarios that came to mind so you have an idea of what could happen and you can think about how you will respond if they do happen.