Hey guys, so Ive just started actually putting some of my pua material that i learned into action. In this thread im gonna be listing some text convos i had with some HBs so i can get some suggestions on how to make them better.

1) HB8, its a girl i knew from highschool that LJBFd me like 8 months ago. Havnt spoken to her since until now. Im trying some C&F stuff so let me know.

Me- Suprise!

HB- Whose this?

Me- dmic...u can stop pretending u didnt know

HB- haha heyy

Me- Havnt spoken in a while. Hope you havnt been up to too much trouble

HB- haha idk santa didnt think so

Me- Yeah well you havnt seen me in months. Suprising...usually that causes some serious side effects

HB- hahahaha

Me- So ur alright? i was concerned...

HB- hahah yes im quite fine actually

Me- well thank god idk what id do without my favorite (HBs first and last name)

HB- hahaha yayy

Me- U made the cut... get pumped!

Any suggestions would be awesome!

Dmic

here are my suggestions:

-you use too many emoticons: you use one almost every time, and she reciprocated once
-makes you seem talking to ehr is making you hyper
-try using one every 5 or so responses

-"So ur alright?" seems kinda creepy unless you knew her well over 8 months ago
-your txts are too long, and hers are too short. try writing out exactly what you want to say, then delete as much of it and contract as much as you can to make the txt use the least amount of words possible.
-make references to events/things/items/objects that you guys had in common in the past
-this shit isnt cocky or funny, shes saying 'haha' because she has no other reply
-she is a combination of 1) busy or 2) not interested
-if you guys had this convo within a short time frame, like 20 mins, then she may have been busy so she replied one worded 'haha' responses
-if you guys had this convo over a lengthy period of time, like a few hours, then she is clearly not interested, which may be due to the fact that you just randomly texted her after not seeing each other for 8 months.

cool thanks man good stuff

Seems okay to me
'Me- well thank god idk what id do without my favorite (HBs first and last name)' chance my favorite to number 3 favorite (first name only) so you're not putting her first place. Usually gets some nice responses.

After some talking I just throw in a 'hey whats your number? If you're lucky I'll tekst you sometime ' usually gets me the number.
Or I like 'Hey let's be serious here...(or 'lettuce b cereal' if you're gangsta) -wait for response- 'Will you marry me?' She'll obviously answer no or plays along. If she answers no just go with 'Damn, well let's atleast meet up sometime then'

Don't be scared to throw this stuff in, you gotta feel the right time though. Don't just go, 'hey wassup bro, marry me!'

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