what ya guys think about this opener
So...I'm 35 and I've been divorced three times. I have four kids...but the good news is I’m finally getting a job. LOL

Ok, seriously...
I'm 23 and have my life together. I'm a very social person and like to spend most of my nights out; oh and I’m all kinds of sarcastic so you'd better like to laugh!
PS - If you respond by asking me to dinner and a movie, im gonna lock myself in a panic room; just dont be boring, lets do somthing spontaneous
anything i should change so i can speak all the girl emotions?