I was trying to get some feed back on my message to this girl. I understand if someone doesn't respond it could be for many reasons(not necessarily to do with me)... I was working at this underground night club as a temp job in my international city. It was gay pride wknd so I used it as a opener and said " you look a girl I'd be interested in but given how gay this weekend is, you could be a katelyn Jenner" we talked for about10min. She was engaged(smiling and asking me questions. I teased her a bit as she got a job in a connected industry. I established rapport. When I asked for her number she let me know she was leaving next month. So I asked her if she was leaving me already and I
said I guess you'll be missed. She responded that she'd be home for a month and then would return... So I took that like she had a lot of interest given that she wanted to give me so much information on months to come

Hello, this Is from music hall. it was nice making your acquaintance at uhall last night but u missed the after party w gay marvine
Very famous producer

An interested girl would respond to you.

However, if a girl was neutral about you, then a little element of charm would be welcomed to turn her neutral to interested.

But with neutral girls, it is wise to not send the most grammatically errored most spastic text I ever read. Please be normal!!!

I mean, it's uncalibrated. Why you send her that text at 2am at night? If you are working the booticall, all is needed is a 'What ya doing?'

Imagine if you got a text from a girl at 2am talking about how random mundane shit? Wouldn't bit a little weird to you?

Anyway...

A 'How are you?' text is wayyyyyyy much better than your message that isn't even readable. You're trying to tell her your whole night's story within one text hoping she would magically match the investment, stop doing that.

Stop being lazy, keep it short and simple. Learn to spell. You don't have to be perfect, but at least make some sense with it.

I know you're probably not native....but all of your threads are the same shit that can be solved by an auto-correct phone setting.

The best for you to do is to remove 'Text Game' from your brain and just try being normal instead.

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i was thinking the opposite, that the grammar was too stringent

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If I was ya man, baby, you'd
Never worry bout what I do
I'd be coming home back to you
Every night, doin' you right

The message was sent at 3:43 pm. I posted about the message late in the evening?

Why do you conclude that I'm not a "native"? Do you mean a native English speaker. Lol
I didn't realize my cellphone having a screen issue would raise questions about my ability to write or my nationality lol

WUT?

Just stop texting like a tard, simple

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