Heres my profile on datehookup.com, I don't have too much experience with making dating profiles. i know that my pictures suck.... horribly, but thats all I have of me in normal clothes because I am deployed so the only picture I could take now would be in ACU's lol.

http://www.datehookup.com/User-265325895.htm

Also heres the kinda standard message ive been using to send to women I am interested in.

'I saw your profile and decided you are interesting enough for me to talk to I just joined this site because I am looking to make some friends to hang out with when I get back from Iraq. I just wanna have some people back home, other than my family, to talk to. "

What can I improve? other than the pictures I mean.

Your message is quite horrible. It DLV's you by saying you have no friends. Read my successful online openers guide on my site. Don't know much about the site but i don't know any hot girls that use dating sites.

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