I"m pretty satisfied with my current Okcupid profile, but I want to know what you think. One girl sent me a message saying "The first two lines, *applause*". I also have an opener that's working really well, I'll put it here if I get some good feedback.

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/darkstar1731

Yeah its a cool page - but your emails need to be congruant with it too. If they are Id say you have A game, if not you'll get knowhere.

2 Openers I've came up with today, try them out and tell me if there getting you responses.

1. I can't figure out if I'm not as hot as I think I am or so hot that girls don't think they have a chance and don't messege me. Tell me what you think, be brutally honest.

2. I know, I know, I'm way too hot for you. Your scared to message me because you don't think you have a chance. But it couldn't hurt to try. Tell me a joke or something interesting about yourself. I'm willing to give you a shot.

The first one got two almost instant responses, both very positive.

Interesting concept.

I can see how this could work well on people you can see have viewed your profile first. "I see you looked at my profile, thought I was too hot for you and left...."


The first one seems like a massive DLV: "Girls never message me"

The second one, to me, is far too aggressive. By all means try it out, but I think most girls would be put off by you giving them orders in an opening message.

Maybe your right about both, but one of the girls who replied to the first one did seem to agree:
"I think girls are probably just intimidated by your looks!

So, I can't figure out if the reason I get so many messages is that I'm hotter than I think I am, or that I'm not hot at all so guys feel I'm harmless. "

I meant the second to be cocky/playful, but I can see it coming across as aggressive.

You should change "Your" to "You're" near the bottom. Bad grammer is a DLV. Otherwise looks good, your pictures are good picks.