So i'm not a proper noob to the dating sites etc, I just wanted some tips about my profile, I pretty much wrote it out within 5 minutes, i've been on a few dates using PoF and had many resposes, this is usually down to the messages I send becuase on a good day, im clever and witty, so im not to fussed about the profile, as long as the main points are coming across and its diffirent to other guys.
This is also m very first post so I think a congrats is in order

I just finished reading the game by strauss which inturn has led me to these sorts of places. So, hi! your guys so I can open with hi?

anyway.....
Would really appreciate someone taking the time to give me some advice.
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I would consider myself very optimistic, It can be infectious sometimes, i'm very open which can lead to people trying to take advantage of you, but as i've learnt, being so open helps me find out who is a bullshitter and who is genuine, I wouldn't change for anyone.
I love to learn new things I am 28 and like to learn something new everyday.
Someone recently told me that I have a great jaw, what the hell? To me that's like saying "You have really nice eyebrows" then again, maybe I have not seen a good example of nice eyebrows?
I spent most of my teenage years riding bmx bikes (not kids bikes!).
My later years would be spent reading, working and becoming less of a geek :) And i've done a pretty good job if you ask me, I am currently taking martial arts and i'm so glad I did.
I am an only child so my best friends are like brothers to me, and I love them more than you.
Life is more fun when you have someone to share it with, that's why i'm here.
Ideally you have a brain and know how to spell (Even if I havn't mastered the art yet, I was talking about you, not me)