I'm new to the PUA scene. alot of good reading here. but i Need some help...

I've been doing online stuff on POF, and been using onetime's method as a general outline or in this case just using it lol. For the most part its worked out ive gotten couple dates out of it.
me using ontime's method:
Me:
i can see where your coming from. Ya, it'd be great to find someone where you can joke around with one moment and be completely serious the next. Someone to call you at random moments and just say, "I miss you." but you always need that little bit of independence.

You know what, you and I are both pretty ambitious people who know what they want.That's why I have a few very close friends. They are the ones I can trust with my life. Now I see the catch. A sexy girl who's smart, has great peronality and knows what she wants, that's still single = super picky.

HB7:
lol i guess you could say that ... i have certain friends that i trust my life with and i've known them since i was real real young

usually im good at replying to this stuff but im drawing a blank.

PS. OneTime major props, that method gets alot of responses