So recently I signed up for Match.com and Plentyoffish. If I wink at 10 people, or email 10 people I'll ussually get one response. My guess is its based on my looks. I am so AFC it's not even funny. I used to think I could get any girl I want, all of the sudden I cant even get a single date. This is what I do to initiate an e-mail.

"Hey, I'm Cory, Oh you(some random fact from the profile) thats cool, I really like to( random fact) too! Whats it like to (random fact) ?"

95% of the time I get no response. The other 5% They answer my questions and I keep it going for 3-6 message tops before they just stop replying. All of my other e-mails are similar to the first one and I ussually end each message with a question.(just typing this is making me realize how boring I must be). I have been doing this about 10 days so far, have talked to maybe 7 girls, only 2 past two messages and have gotten nowhere.

Also how do I transition it to ask for a date and how long should I wait, I tried that twice on the two girls i got to 6 replies with and got NO response. Also I'll link my main profile text if someone wants to critique it but I dont want to create a wall of text and want to focus on one thing at a time. Thanks

I have the same problem, I would also like to know.

This is not an interview, dont question her every time u message, because she'll just get bored and its the reason why she probably doesnt message u back. You need to throw some negs, they need to be very playful though and make sure u use emotions with them. Also, get her to qualify herself (look this up if u need help on this). Im not saying stop questioning her, but make the conversation as fun as possible, every other guy is going to ask her what shes been up to and her favourite hobbys and such. Sometimes i just dont care and ask her to go and rob a bank with me(obviously not serious), because girls love roleplay, and then you just carry on from there.

Personally, i dont like your opener, you need to be more creative and such, the conversation just sounds a little plain from the beginning. Lighten it up a little, i cant help you on the opener because i dont do much opening on-line but try something else instead because it doesnt sound to lively.

Hope i helped