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MazeMiami
 Post subject: POF Profile Critique!
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 7:08 pm 
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Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:09 am
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Here's the link give it to me good lol tell me what i'm doing right and most importantly whats wrong.

http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=16060521

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dw3llz
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PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 7:45 pm 
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Well done my friend. You brag quit a bit and it will work out in the long run. I would take out two pictures though, where your peeing yourself, and the "need a hot date" sign. The peeing yourself one could be funny though, the other seems needy.

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MazeMiami
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 11:05 pm 
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Thanks for the advice, any other takers
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Chelios
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 11:45 pm 
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Looks good, I like the flow of it, mixed emotions, and good thing is you'll get messages from women with a sense of humour.
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MazeMiami
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PostPosted: Sun May 09, 2010 12:34 am 
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Thanks, always working on tweaking it all advice is appreciated
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minsok
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 11:04 am 
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TOO MANY PICTURES! You kind of look the same in all of them, so why not be choosy? Some of them seem like you're just trying to impress people with social proof. You're a lovable prick AND mature and down to earth? Seems contradictory. Last paragraph is super negative, it's not even really playful. The rest... doesn't need fixing.
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