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| ChuMp | PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:04 am | |
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Location: Calgary | | Wow, seems like forever since I last posted.
Well, I had a quick question about a simple online situation I'm in.
I've sent a couple messages so far along the lines of:
"Wow *something about pictures*, but you're profile's a little skimpy on the details/lacking some oomph eh? Or is that all there is to know?"
It's direct I think, but I find it sounds a little harsh for me. I wanna keep it light and maybe a little teasing. How does it sound?
So far no responses.
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| jurupa | PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 4:26 am | |
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Location: OC, California | | That to me sounds a bit insulting as it is a bit harsh and a tad rude because of it. As well as not very direct. I would say maybe:
"Your pretty attractive in your pictures, but your profile is a bit light on who you are. Unless this is all there is to know about you?
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| ChuMp | PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 5:18 am | |
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Location: Calgary | | Hahaha, knew it sounded a bit off, thanks.
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| jurupa | PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:59 am | |
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Location: OC, California | | Your welcome. I actually like the line myself and going to see how well it works on the short profiles I run into on dating sites.
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