Just trying to come up with something different to all the profiles I've seen for an Adult friend finder type site (may have pinched a few lines or ideas here and there, haha). Going for a little humour in the headline and mystery in the profile. Here's what I have so far. Please critique and give any help, thanks.

Headline:

"I may be and idiot sir, but there is one thing I am not, and that is an idiot."

About me:

About me... Where to start? Who knows? Too many places. Where to end? I can't, the end is still very far away. Well, better still give a little insight...

Fun and enrgetic... but calm and collect
Cheeky and offensive... but playful and considerate
Love to give... and love recieving
Honest and loyal... but no one's doormat
Untamable... and enjoyable!

Looking for:

A fun, intelligent, down to earth girl that can see the lighter side of life. I like to playfully tease and joke and like a girl who can throw back what I throw at her so a sense of humour is a must. Life is too short to be up tight and have regrets.
I do take pride in my appearance so I am attractd to women who do the same. Now I love a beautiful woman as much as the next guy but if I can't get along with you there isn't any point. It is so much more attractive to be turned on by a few words rather than a flick of the hair or batt of the eyelids.
I'm not looking for a relationship but if the right girl were to come along and something started to develop... well, I'll cross that bridge when I get to it. So lt's talk and have fun, because that's why we're all here right?


Thanks guys, rip in!

I don't like dating sites. They suck. Sure you can hook up, but 9 times out of ten you're gonna be wasting time, chatting with some chick who the whole is lieing about herself. They don't care, seems fun to them. But you just wasted a bunch of time.

I'd recomend facebook or myspace. SInce they are not dating sites, chicks are more real, because their actual friends will be looking at it.

Maybe that's what you meant.

As for your add, I can make a couple of constructive comments. You certainly had some funny stuff on there but it seemed to get long. It was sort of wordy. I think dumb broads are gonna take a pass real quick and you don't want to leave them out.

At the start you broke things out nice, but the big paragraph at the end really put a damper on the flow.

I scored a discounted membership so I thought i'd give it a go. Thanks for your help man. I see what you mean about it getting long and ruining the flow at the end, I'll put a bit of work into that.
Anyone else have any input? Thanks.