Hey guys.

I would like some advice for my online profile which i'm putting on various dating sites to see how it goes. So far I haven't had any success so I guess it's either something on my profile, which I need your advice for, or from the messages I send (Testing a few lines from here right now).

So first of all, here are the 2 pictures I've put up. What do you think about them ?



As for my description, here it is (approximate translation) :
As for living, better to do it with happiness and a smile. In love with danses, I'm always open to new discoveries

I'm not really satisfied with it, but couldn't find anything better even after reading here. And I'd like to add a DHV spike too, but don't really know how to do it subtly.

So, what do you think ?

Those pictures are good, but I think you could add a lot there. You're a good looking dude, but girls don't care about looks all that much. Add a picture with you hanging out with friends. The cooler your friends look (especially if there are hot girls in the mix), and the more you look like the center of attention, the better. And if you can, take a picture of you doing something unique or dangerous. Skydiving, rock climbing, playing music on stage, etc.

Your description is short, which is good, but sounds kinda girly. Think of what a high value alpha male would say. I'd recommend one or two sentences about you, playing up your attractive qualities. Then a couple sentences about what you're looking for in a girl. The tone should suggest that you're confident, you're successful, you're picky about what girls are good enough for you, you don't care that much what people think of you, and maybe you're even a bit of an asshole.

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I don't make love. I fuck. Hard.

The B/W one should be your profile pic. It's good.

The other pic...I'd scrap it. Looks like a bad high school yearbook photo...with the sun in your eyes.

Tough love. No homo.