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 Post subject: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 9:36 pm 
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Good morning/afternoon/evening gentlemen. I just remade my POF account. I am wondering if I could get someone to critique and give me feed back. My UN is Hayeshaze91. If you can't find it, I'll post my statement about myself, and you can get a feel for me. Concerning the height joke on there, I'm actually 5'6 also lol.

Fun guy with a fun sense of humor who likes to have fun. Yes, I do dance, and have been doing so for about 6 years. I do hip hop freestyle, but I could maybe be your personal stripper O.o. I go out sometimes, and if we ever do, don't be a wall flower. That's such a damn bore and turn off. Get out and get active! I'm 6'5 on a good day. I tell Men's Warehouse "they're gonna like they way they look". My cuddling is far from mediocre. I'm secretly a world class masseuse. And I always wake up on the right side of the bed.
Concerning passion, it has to be with animals. Yes I will be a veterinarian. No I cannot give you veterinary service discounts under the table, haha. College's pay me tuition. I once took care of Rihanna's pet chihuahua. K. Michelle's black Labrador retriever was cooler though. I like medium sized dogs better. I don't ask for too much in a woman. Just be yourself. If you like a lot food, then I'm your chef. Americas Top Chef got tips from me. If you like sexual topics, I'm your nasty man. Playgirl wanted me on the set, I had to turn them down though. Don't let the views of society dictate your thoughts and expression. So if you have the even the slightest thought of "man, I think I should probably hang out with this guy" chances are I will be thinking the same thing about you. So take your awesome self to your mailbox email me! It'll be your pleasure. Let's have a good time.


Ps. Not sure why I didn't think of this. Here's the link lol:

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=73539477


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:41 am 
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I like your headline. You should put up more photos, maybe 10 more at least, and don't have yourself too far from the camera.


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 3:42 pm 
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Appreciate the comments sir! I see I'm racking up a few views here and there. I'd appreciate more comments/feedback instead of "empty visits" lol


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:02 pm 
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Couple critiques - (and it's for the purposes of helping you - please take them as constructive, and not insulting):

- Overall it's really not bad, firstly....

- More pics, and better quality. Some are so grainy you can't even tell what you're looking at.

- Get rid of the pointless shirtless pic. Nobody cares.

- The vet pics and ones with animals are great! Seriously - more of those (puppies, dude... puppies).

- As for your write-up, it's not bad. I personally don't like the 'ha ha's' in it. The men's wearhouse line is a bit much also.

- Split into paragraphs. Easier to read.


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2014 1:44 pm 
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^ now that's what I'm talking about! Appreciate that sir.


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2014 2:39 pm 
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I know more people than CharlesFinley and Apples have some advice lol.


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2014 4:56 am 
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Honestly the first picture looks weird as hell.

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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2014 4:08 am 
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Lol it's just to show off my pants, something most haven't seen. I get a lot of compliments in person due to how different they are. "Peacocking" if you will lol. Anything else?


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 Post subject: Re: Fishing Critique
PostPosted: Thu Jun 05, 2014 10:50 pm 
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Can I get a few more critiques please?


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